Original: Sejul's Story for TOEIC Day 37

Sejul's Story for TOEIC Day 37

Already, 1 week was past since I started this story.
Time is very fast than I expected

I thought that I didn't do anything until now.
Only time'd been passed.

I too sleep when I ate something. I think I spend many time for fighting with asleep. It's so waste thus I usually do not eat as much as can. 

Only to me It's one of the very difficulty tasks. 
A lot of time to spend for studying is good to student like me, but also 
Important is to concentrate on studying time even shorty time.  


I think my studying type is quite slow than other students, but I think too do study is much better than not to do.
Okay It's time to begin study now!



Revised: Already, 1 week has passed since I started this story; time is passing by much faster than I expected. I feel that I didn't do anything until now, only time has been passing. 

I become too sleepy when I eat something. I think I spend a lot of time fighting with sleep. It's such a waste, thus I usually try not to eat as much as possible. Only, to me, it's a very difficult task.

A lot of time to spend for studying is good for a student like me, but it's also important to concentrate on studying even when there isn't much time.  

I think my studying type is quite slow compared to other students, but I think to study is much better than not to study at all. 

Okay, it's time to begin studying now!  

우와 Bryan 씨 정말 잘했어요. 많은 실수가 없지만 저의 정정들은 Bryan 씨의 일지에게 더 자연스럽게 만들어요. 한국어 잘 못해서 미안해요. 내 말 이해가 돼죠? ㅎㅎ 앞으로 더 열심히 공부해요. 힘내세요!

Original: Hi I Like To Learn English

Because English Is a Life

Correction: Hi, I would like to learn English because English is (a gateway to a new) life.

I'm not exactly sure what you were trying to say in the last part so I just made up a part in the parentheses. You did pretty good for your first try.

You did good, but I'm going to make a few corrections.

Original:

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i wanna learning my self how can speak english very good
and i wanna have a new friends cause i like know a friends
my name is tofe
and my old is 23
and i living in iraq
and i fnish my collge in iraq eng_electronic
and i work in Company for the advertisement of medicines, medical

Revised:

I want to(wanna) learn how to speak English very well and I want to make new friends because I like knowing friends. My name is Tofe and I'm 23 years old. I live in Iraq and I'm finishing college in Iraq eng_electronics. I work for a company that creates advertisements for medicines and other medical related things.