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Original: Sejul's Story for TOEIC Day 37
Sejul's Story for TOEIC Day 37
Already, 1 week was past since I started this story.
Time is very fast than I expected
I thought that I didn't do anything until now.
Only time'd been passed.
I too sleep when I ate something. I think I spend many time for fighting with asleep. It's so waste thus I usually do not eat as much as can.
Only to me It's one of the very difficulty tasks.
A lot of time to spend for studying is good to student like me, but also
Important is to concentrate on studying time even shorty time.
I think my studying type is quite slow than other students, but I think too do study is much better than not to do.
Okay It's time to begin study now!
Revised: Already, 1 week has passed since I started this story; time is passing by much faster than I expected. I feel that I didn't do anything until now, only time has been passing.
I become too sleepy when I eat something. I think I spend a lot of time fighting with sleep. It's such a waste, thus I usually try not to eat as much as possible. Only, to me, it's a very difficult task.
A lot of time to spend for studying is good for a student like me, but it's also important to concentrate on studying even when there isn't much time.
I think my studying type is quite slow compared to other students, but I think to study is much better than not to study at all.
Okay, it's time to begin studying now!
우와 Bryan 씨 정말 잘했어요. 많은 실수가 없지만 저의 정정들은 Bryan 씨의 일지에게 더 자연스럽게 만들어요. 한국어 잘 못해서 미안해요. 내 말 이해가 돼죠? ㅎㅎ 앞으로 더 열심히 공부해요. 힘내세요!
Sejul's Story for TOEIC Day 37
Already, 1 week has past since I started this story.
Time has gone by a lot faster than I expected
I feel like I haven't done anything until now.
Only time pasing by.
I'm too sleepy when I eating something. I think I spend much time for fighting going asleep. It's such a waste of time, so I usually do not eat as much as I should.
Only, to me, It's one of the harder tasks.
A lot of time is spent for studying is good for a student like me, but also it is
important is to concentrate on studying time if there is not much time.
I think my studying ability is quite slow compared to other students, but I think studying is much better than not studying at all.
Okay It's time to begin studying now!
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