First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm a a college student , I am (<em>Understood from context</em>)from HEILONGJIANG.

I learn [have been learning] English for many years, But has [I had] no interest in learning English (<em>Understood from context</em>) . Not a good language (<em>Understood from context</em>) environment. [I] Hope that by joining the site , [I will] Improve [my] English level and make many friends.

非常好 !

Very good!

Tomorrow I will be [go] back to school

Tomorrow I will be [go] back to school. My university is located in a city in the north of China. The weather is getting cold, I want to see the first snow of this year.

University -Four grades of life began.To add their own refueling.

[It] <em>is a good thing to make friends </em>[On] this website to make friends is a good thing,

[It's good to make friends on this website.]
 

Thank you everyone.
I'm as happy as a clam <------ Very awkward. 

Good! 

The Tragedy of Family Planning

This morning when I was having breakfast in a noodle house, I encountered Uncle Wang, the director of Family Planning Bureau of my county who is living upstairs from me. We discussed that when would be the best time to adjust the one-child policy, which having  [has] been carried out for more than 30 years in China.

In the late 1970s, in order to control the population, [The] Chinese government decided to implement the Family Planning , which was also known as [the] "one-child policy ".

This policy brought disaster to many Chinese families, including mine. About two years after I was born, my mother became pregnant [for more than seven months] <em>Consider revising. </em>As [Because of] the one-child policy, she was forced [into] induced abortion by the local authority.

Another case, one of my childhood friends drunk [drank] pesticide to commit suicide for his name when he was only nine. As his family had already had a son, he was illegal. According to Chinese law, his parents was [were] fined a huge sum of money. Because of this, his parents named him "倒运" which means bad luck in Chinese , and they prefered his brother much than him. One day, his parents scolded him for trifles again. He felt very sad and drunk [drank] pesticide.
[???A little creature gone away.???] <== consider revising, I do not understand this.

Goooood!!!! 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi

I am Gudli<em> <--- Correct, but I'm instead of I am is much more common. </em>
I want to learn english because in the present world english language plays a
vital role in the communication. I need engllish in my college, with my frieds friends
and everywhere <--- correct, but should be changed so something like "in other areas".

So please help me...

Good!!! 

Indian food

Everybody who has ever visited India ever certainly misses Indian cuisine.The simplest reason behind it is that in this country, food has been a part of one's [our] identity. People connect their food with their religion and spirituality. Besides, our people do believe in the ancient way of therapy, i.e., Ayurveda. This branch of medicinal science entirely depends upon herbs what [which] are found in the forests and mountains. [???and into the seas????] and   <em> I am not sure what you meant by this sentence.</em> 

Indian spices are certainly a fractional part of these valuable herbs. Therefore, [by] including these spices people give a different identity to their food. Indian foods are as multifaceted as Indian culture. You would certainly like to taste the Indian Roadside Chai (tea) to Mughlai Kabaab. 

Goood!! ^_^

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I'm Vivian, a 14-year-old daught[er]s mother who grew up in Shanghai [Not entirely sure what you meant by daught's].  Next year, about [around] July or Auguster, my daughter will go to Australia to study the courses of [in] high school, and I will go with her. So I hope to improve my English just as [for] reading, writing, speaking and listening.

Thank you for all.

Very good!!!