Wait till that day --2

When that day comes,
Everything will no longer be complex.
When the sea drowns the sky and the earth,
I don't need to ask, "do you still love me?" 

Stillness. Love the unknown wild flowers,
Sitting on a hillside, we watched the sunset together.
There's nothing that love can do about us,
though we still can't say that word.

Perhaps only waiting untill that day,
when we could lovingly gaze at
each other's tearful faces.
Perhaps only waiting untill that day,
we could promise sincerely 
that we will never separate untill the end of the time. 

When that day come, we will need no words.
Hand in hand, enjoying the most splendid
final landscape of the world.
When the blue sea drowns the earth and sand,
we will be the free birds
flying to the ends of the earth.

Introducing myself

I am a businesswoman.

I am changing jobs and working in England.

In addition, i would like to communicate with foreigners when i travel.

That is why I study English.

I took a guess at the second line, is this accurate?

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, this is Johnny Wu, a Chinese guy who is eager to know more friends in different countries and different cultures. 
To learn English is a necessary step towards fulfilling my dream to travel around the world, then settle down on a beautiful farm, living a peaceful life forever... I'm seeking freedom, to get out of the cage, the chains that fetter me, and I'll never stop untill that dream comes true. Besides that, I've always dreampt of experiencing a western Christmas with friends in western countries. Help me with this little wish, and I'll do whatever I can to help you. Does that sound fair? :p
I am always open to talk, so please fell free to contact me.

-Johnny, your writing is strong and your english is pretty advanced. I was particularily impressed by your vocabulary. (Fettered! wow, many americans would have to look that word up--note, it's usually used in reference to ankle bound chains). Outside of some small grammatical changes, you are well on your way to completing your goal of learning English.   

My friend's quesion.

- What do you think about Mr. Park Won moving to a rental apartment at Kang-Nam?

I can’t understand why this story about him is important. I asume this is just a kind of conspiracy to do him harm.
He had devoted his whole life to people but he is just one of many who lives in a capitalist society. If his wealth was accumulated fairly, why does it matter? In other words, is it fair to insist that the essential qualification of a civic movement leader is to live in poverty as well?
The wealthy have a right to civic action too. I think this story is biased.

Some feelings are hard to give up!

Our friendship was new, we were new classmates, but our feelings for one another were strong. Though we have only known each other for 1 month, we have had dinners together, we attended classes together, etc. 
I imagined us spending our college life together, but last thursday, you told me you will be leaving. When I heard that, I cried beacuse it felt so sudden. ("Sleep together"? in the same bed?) 
Since you left , I have been terribly unhappy! I miss you very much!
When I spoke to my friends about it they said we could still be together if we were in one school, maybe they are right. 
Promise me this; when you have time, come visit me at my house!  
I cannot wait to see you. 

求指点~~~~~~~please~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

As shown in the picture, student's undergo too much academic pressure. They have become used to struggling in a sea of exercises. As a high school student, as far as I'm concerned, I don’t think it is wise for teachers and parents to put pressure on students. 

To begin with, there is no doubt that too much academic pressure will do harm to a students' physical and mental development. As the proverb goes, "all work and no play makes Jake a dull boy". Finally, too much academic pressure will prevent students from further developing their overall ability, thus having a negative effect on their all-round development. 
It’s high time for parents and teachers to think over this situation. They should maintain the balance between study and entertainment. In short, please provide students with more space to develop their hobbies.
这是看图说话作文。有没有偏题，或者语法错误，希望得到指点。^-^~!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, my friends ! I am excited to join this web club to learn Engish. Now let me introduce myself: I am a university student in grade two, i enrolled in an English speech contest that will happen soon and then English four two months later . More importantly though , i would love to make friends . That is all, I look forward to your advice，thank you！

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I`m from China. My english is not good, so i joined this community to increase my english proficiency.