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求指点~~~~~~~please~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ As a vividly shown in the picture,student's have to much academic pressure and they have got used to struggling hard in the sea of exercises.As a high school student as far as I'm concerned, I don’t think it wise for teachers and parents to undue pressure to students.My reasons are lised as follows. To begin with,there is no doubt that too much academic pressure will do harm to students'physical and mental development. what's more as a proverb goes:all work and no play makes Jake a dull boy.Finally,much academic pressure will prevent students from further developing their overall ability,thus having a negative effect on their all-round development. It’s high time for parents and teachers to think over this situation.As for parents and teachers,they should keep the balance between study and entertainment.In a word,please provide students with more space to develop their hobbies. 这是看图说话作文。有没有偏题,或者语法错误,希望得到指点。^-^~!

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求指点~~~~~~~please~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

As shown in the picture, student's undergo too much academic pressure. They have become used to struggling in a sea of exercises. As a high school student, as far as I'm concerned, I don’t think it is wise for teachers and parents to put pressure on students. 

To begin with, there is no doubt that too much academic pressure will do harm to a students' physical and mental development. As the proverb goes, "all work and no play makes Jake a dull boy". Finally, too much academic pressure will prevent students from further developing their overall ability, thus having a negative effect on their all-round development. 
It’s high time for parents and teachers to think over this situation. They should maintain the balance between study and entertainment. In short, please provide students with more space to develop their hobbies.
这是看图说话作文。有没有偏题,或者语法错误,希望得到指点。^-^~!

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