nice choices~ apart from those you mentioned,you can try Will Pan,Nicky Lee. Eason Chan is quite good and popular too but not sure if its your type.

hsk短文

大家好！最近我开始准备hsk考试了，考试的一部分是写作。如果大家可以改正下面的写作，我就会非常感激：）

1。 请结合下列词语，写一段80字左右的短文。
元旦，善良，放松，礼物 ，表演

元旦时我童年时的一个朋友请我来(去)看他她的表演。表演完/结束以后我们互相给交换新年礼物，一起回忆童年的生活，<em>我有仿佛我们还是小孩子的感觉 </em>仿佛我们还是小孩子/仿佛又回到了我们的童年时光。跟我的朋友在一起我会很放松，因为她是(个)非常善良的人。

2。请结合这张图片写一篇80字左右的短文。

由于人类地球上的许多物种已经没有(消失)了，更多快会要(濒临)灭绝。Greenpeace之类的机关机构/组织号召人类爱护环境。法律规定在有的地方不能打猎，不能钓鱼，因为这个会破坏大自然的平衡。

当然这些都可能不太自然，有点笨，这个不是我的思想想法就只是一种项/个模拟题考试的任务练习/作业：）最下面是第二题的图片。

I love music very much,I can't live without music,so listen to music would be my first choice when dealing with a bad mood or depression.

Besides,I might try to watch movies,or play games etc.,which might helps to distract my attention away from the issues.

Plus,you can try to do some exercises,with friends or alone,depends on youself.It really makes you feel much better after some sports exercise.

Last,don't drink coffee or something like that that will enhance the depression.

Good luck!:)

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Please, correct this text. Thank you.

Hi! I had tried to translate few interesting facts from Russia into English. Please correct this text.
 
Fans of hoсkey club "Detroyt red Uingz" have a tradition. They throw on the ice feezefreezed octopus after every goal in play-off matches. This traditional was born in 1952 year. In thisthat time team was needed 8 winnerplayers forto win the Stanley Cup. Octopus was throwedthrew by one fans of this team. After this incedentaccident fans waswere began to do this in every match, after every goal.

First online auction "E-bay" was created by Pierre Amidyar in 1995 year. First product, which was sold out in this auction, is a broken laser pointer. It was sold out forat $14.83$. Amidyar was surprised. And He asked the buyer: AreDo you really understand, that this laser pointer is broken?".  The buyer replied that he understandedunderstood it and he collects broken laser pointer. 

Since 1980 year muicants, who was play in metro stations, was needed for especial resolution. Only 75 people can get this licension. If you want get this, you realy must play very well. Also you should pay 150$. After this you get your place and time.

Most of the world's <em>minig of opals</em> ???are situated in an Australian city----Coober-Pedy. This city situated in (a) hot desert. Therefore many people lives in a underground cave. The cave appears after <em>minig</em>(morning?). These flats(apartments) have allboth water, electricity and other comunication. These (flats)apartments have furniture, wallpaper, decoration,etc. And people lives in it constantly.

Ants can conversates with other ants. They can explain to others how to go tofor/get the food. Also they can add numbers. For example when one ant find (out) the way to (get) a food, heit comes back, and explain to others the way. Therefore other ants can find (out) this food even without the pheromonal track. Also if you will put foods in boxes withfor some periods, (for example, if you put foods in the boxes for 5-th,10-th,15-th etc.boxes), the ants after some time will find (out) the foods in certain boxes.

I might misunderstood some of the words,and my English is still not that good enough though,but I checked every word carefully and tried to corrected the little mistakes with my ideas,just hope it can helps you a bit.

Good job though,and good luck!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi,My name is Wang Zhen,it is my Chinese name.My English name is Dream,this name seem girlgirlish ,but I am a boy. :) Now ,I am working in Beijing and this is my first job,because I was just graduated.I like making friends and like traveling. Of course ,I like English ,because foreign culture is very good,so english is important to me .If you see this my content ,I hope you (can) help me ,of course ,I will help you with my enthusiasm (too).Thank you.

2011-9-23

I 'm preparing tofor the class now.I have two classes tomorrow and I always try to<em> make more active in my class</em>(make my class more active/make a more active atmosphere in my class/liven up my class,etc.), I hope that they're not only study with me but (also)play with me. Even though they're my students ,(still)I treat them as my friends in some way.(I treat them as my firends in some way even thought they are my students.)

Strive for better life.