I wrote a poem in French, please help edit!!! Hello there ^^ :3 I'm trying to learn French on my own and have a few French-speaking friends! I don't know much of the language at all, but I really am trying to learn! :D I like to write poetry often so I try to write it in the languages I'm learning because it's a fun way for me to learn! Sorry if my writing is rough! Please edit and if you could tell me WHY certain parts were edited (verb agreement problems, etc...) I would be EXTREMELY thankful!!! Here we go: Feux d'artifice silencieux Sur la toiture, Avec la beauté des couleurs chaudes à la avant la fille, C'etait la plupart de l'elegant événement, Mais elle n'était pas là. Dans la foule des gens sans visage, Seulement momentanément, Elle le vit, le lui, Et avec ce beau hallucination Elle renaît, Reconnecté, Profondément lié à son âme. Here it is in English: Silent Fireworks On the roof With the beauty of the warm colors before the girl, It was the most elegant event But she was not there. In the crowd of faceless people, Only momentarily, She saw him. And with this beautiful hallucination She was reborn, Reconnected, Deeply bound to his soul.

毎日の詠歌：1日目 I am trying to write a poem in Japanese everyday to improve my 日本語 skills! Please read and correct me if you have the time!! ありがとう！！！ 私たちの関係 暗い夜中ですの時、 私は私たちの輝き退色幻影を見ます あなたの、私たち。 美しくて、壊れた笑顔。 私たちの無邪気な夢は現実に盗まれました あなたの笑顔がはやくあらいながされました。 私たちは誰でした？ 私たちのメモリは単なる妄想ですか？ そうです。それは浪漫的的幻覚でした。 時々私が目を閉める時、 私は私たちの甘くて忘れられた夢を覚えています。 でも、その後あなたの幻影を薄れます。 私が座って、考えます。 考えます。 考えます。 I'll write out what I tried to get it to mean in English for a clearer understanding: Our Relationship When it is dark at night I see the fading glow of our illusion, I see the illusion of you, of us. A beautiful, broken smile. Our innocent dreams were stolen by reality, And your smile quickly washed away. Who were we? Are our memories mere delusions? Yes, fantastic hallucinations. Sometimes, when I close my eyes, I remember our sweet, forgotten dreams But then your apparition begins to fade. Then I sit down and I think, I think, I think.