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こんにちは!私はれんです。19歳です。
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- Practice writing English - Lin.Hello my name is Lin. I'm <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">come</s> from Thailand. I like to listen to Chinese songs. My favourite colour is green. I like formula one and MotoGP - and I’m doing listening practice <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">for</s> by listening to them. I like WangYibo and XiaoZhan. They <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">is</s> are my inspiration.0 votedAugust 13, 20200
- It was too hot in Japan today. (It sounds more natural this way)The rainy season has ended and so it's been very hot in Japan.The news said that it (I wouldn’t recommend saying “it” here. English needs to be very specific! So say “today” or “this week” just note if you make it more than one day you need to change “temperature” to plural “temperatures” ) was the highest temperature this season.It seems that many people got heatstroke.Everyone, please take care of yourself!Good job! The things I changed were mostly just nitpicking to make the paragraph sound more fluent! You’re typed english seems very advanced :D0 votedAugust 13, 20200
- 068_2008 Could you help me by correcting the text ?【Interesting Quote 】I found a very interesting quote on internet today.<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">That is</s> It was, "Age is something that doesn’t matter, unless you are a cheese." by Luis Bunuel.According to my research, he is a film director who is originally from Spain.I think that he has a rich <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">humor sense</s> sense of humor, and I love it.As we get older, we <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">are become</s> start to make excuses for everything.<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">Meanwhile</s> however, the words he said <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">gives</s> gave me the <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">push</s> drive to learn English.Orange is for word and phrases I removed. Purple is for changes I made. I changed some words to sound more natural! The words a native english speaker would use in this situation! I would like to point out the reason I changed it from “it is ‘age is something...’” to “It was, ‘Age is something...’” is because you **found** the quote which is past tense so you should provide the quote past tense as well!0 votedAugust 12, 20202

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