It was too hot today in Japan.
The rainy season has ended and it's been very hot in Japan.
News say that it was the highest temperature this season.
It seems that many people get heatstroke.
Everyone, please take care of yourself!
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It was too hot today in Japan today.
The rainy season has ended and it's been very hot in Japan.
The news says that it was the highest temperature of this season.
It seems that many people are getting get heatstroke.
Everyone, please take care of yourself!
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It was too hot in Japan today. (It sounds more natural this way)
The rainy season has ended and so it's been very hot in Japan.
The news said that it (I wouldn’t recommend saying “it” here. English needs to be very specific! So say “today” or “this week” just note if you make it more than one day you need to change “temperature” to plural “temperatures” ) was the highest temperature this season.
It seems that many people got heatstroke.
Everyone, please take care of yourself!
Good job! The things I changed were mostly just nitpicking to make the paragraph sound more fluent! You’re typed english seems very advanced :D
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