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Viaje a Suecia
En Febrero del 3 al 9, fui a Suecia con otros 7 otros estudiantes y la profesora Úlfar.
Volamos a Estocolmo y tomamos un tren de 20 horas a Abisko.
Donde nos enteramos que había avalanchas, y se fue a esquiar al campo de travesía.
Viðar se cayó y tuvo que ir al hospital.
Después de 3 noches en Abisko volvimos a Estocolmo.
Yo y mi amiga Anna fuimos de compras. Me compré ropa y joyas.
Al día siguiente fuimos a Islandia.
Menos Viðar que estaba todavía en el hospital.No entiendo muy bien algunas frases y veo problemas de verbos
Intenta hacer frases mas cortas y seguidas para que la historia tenga sentido.
SIGUE ASIIII !!
0 votedFebruary 27, 20130- Spain and his traditional problems, in this case: bullfighting In my point of view bullfighting is a cultural movement and they create turism in our country. This particular case was quite studied, for instance bulls have a beautiful life, bulls live like kings… (this says bullfighting defenders) if bullfighting doesn´t exist, bulls will be extinct. In fact, bull meat is expensive and difficult to cook. Spain is known for its bullfights, paella and flamenco. Moreover of it´s beaches and his good weather. We can´t destroyed our main fests. On the other hand, this kind of ‘sport’ could be different, I don´t know exactly how. But bulls could go on living after the run and not be killed by the ‘matador’. Bullfighting associations should change the rules and make them a lot more sociable and entertaining. For example ‘Rejoneo’ is an interesting ‘sport’ and the bull just exhausted but not dead, moreover all family enjoy it. I think EU are wrong if make bullfighting illegal in Spain, for the same reason hunters should stop hunting. But it´s impossible because they take care the forest and endangered species. In conclusion if EU make bullfighting illegal in Spain, we will invent a new game or new sport to use bullrings, and this big space. Maybe we could be going back to Roman times. Questions for this writing: How far do you sympathize with the Spanish view of bullfighting? Do you think bullfighting is an acceptable 'sport' or should it be banned? Should the EU be allowed to make bullfighting illegal in Spain, or not?February 27, 201330
- advantages and disadvantages of alternative medicine Nowadays there are lots of products to Health yourself. If you don´t feel well you can visit your GP and he decide how to treat you. He may prescribe you some medicine to cure your illness. This is normal. However, this kind of medicine could be has side effects. In spite of these potencial effects the doctors may treatment. There are alternative medicine like acupunture, homeopathic, massages... The main advantages of these methods is that are natural and it don´t make dependency. Although alternative medicine isn´t as developed as traditional medicine. Besides, in some countries these kind of treatments have bad reputation in society. From my point of view, in these medicine you need trying with differents treatments, for example, in case of homeopathic some persons can treat his illness with some plants and herbs, but the body of other persons can´t accept these first treatment and we will must to try with others plants. As a result, i think that this is a "slow-medicine", you must to know your own body to make a good treatment. On the other hand, people find fast results to get better in few days. In this case, tradicional medicine is sure. In conclusion, if you don´t feel well visit your doctor because is expert in this. They shall arrange for help. If you don´t believe his diagnostic don´t think more, there are others alternatives medicines. Find the best for you.October 28, 201200
- Have a date nowadays.... Where...Who...Why ?? Nowadays im 27, when i was 15 or 19, everybody met people in the street, in your neighbourd... now to met persons its necessary social networks, like facebook, tuenti, QQ, kik... i dont know very well this form of contact or dates... Where is the personal contact?? Are real its photos? Do you know how its smell? Do you like his7her clothes? Do you prefer to prepare for dinner or be at the computer eating chips? Now we can choose this differents forms to met new people. However for how long? Mail Letters are been disappearing !!! Please take a call and go out too dinner all weekends and make hugs !! it would be better for all !! take care world !July 31, 201202
- Olimpics Games One of the more popular sports events Is Olimpics Games. All world's TVs are going to be there. Im impatient to enjoy for OG, I wish I could be in Londres this month! However I wouldn't assisted because I have a lession in my leg and i can't take the plane (activations airoplane detectors) The security would think that I have explosions or arms... I don't going to pass this detectors and I wouldn't like to be arrest during one month and miss the OG!! I don't go to run the risk of don't wacth this spectacular event. I'm going to be in my sofa and my beers!!!! Love SportsJuly 26, 201200
- i remember one day..... When i was a child i usually went to practise soccer in one team, near my neighboord. The class finished and it was the time to training, but... where is my sport bag? I forget it in my classroom, but school was closed. I had an idea, i can use the emergency door to go into school. I did it, i was in the corridor, near of the class´s door, i try to open. its was closed whit the keys. Suddenly, i heard a noisy, someone was in the stairs!! i ran to the toilets and i waited. Few minutes later all was calm. The door of the teachers class was open, i could jump to my class for the balcony, because it was open. I was in the second floor and i just only one opportunity to do it. I felt nervous but i needed my bag. After the jump i was looking for the bag in front the window, i see it in my class site, below my table. i take the bag, and i opened the door. (i can do it in this site) i ran to the emergency door and climbed up the perimetral fences. Finally i late to training, and i had to paid a fine of 2€. This is one of my favourites memories, i love to tell !July 25, 201230
El camino equivocado ...
Toqué a la puerta muy ruidosamente para que alguien que estuviera dentro pudiera escucharme a pesar de la tempestad. Nadie respondió. Era importante que consiguiera ayuda, y creíaimaginaba que encontraría un teléfono dentro, así que entré. Creí “Si alguien está en casa, me va a entender.” Hacía calor en el interior pero me sentí estraño, como si una mano fría me tocase el brazo. Si no estuviese desesperado, me habría ido inmediatamente. En cambio, me dije “Tranquilízate; no tengas miedo. Te encontraste en una situación peor hace pocos años, y todo acabó bien. No te preocupes.” De pronto me di cuenta de que la casa era exactamente parecida (igual) a la de en mis sueños. Sabía que en el comedor habría un cuadro en la pared del presidente Juarez, y un pequeña mesa negra con un teléfono rojo encima. Esperaba que nada de eso estuviera allí, sino PERO eso fue exactamente lo que vi. Cuando traté de utilizar el teléfono, descubrí que, como en mi sueño, alguien estaba diciendo: “Cuando él salga de la puerta, mátelo.” Me debo haber quedado quedé paralizado (o Me debí quedar paralizado) de miedo por durante siete u ocho minutos. Entonces oí la puerta de entrada que se estaba abriendo.
NO ESTA MAL, BASTANTE BIEN SE ENTIENDE EL TEXTO SIN HACERTE LAS CORRECCIONES!! FALTA EL FINAL DE LA HISTORIA, ME ESTABA ENGANCHANDO!!!
0 votedDecember 21, 20111la chica de las calabazas
El día de Halloween, Hu me invitó al parque porque por la noche había una fiesta.
Cuando estaba esperando el autobús, vi a una chica pequeña vestida como una princesa, con dos calabazas en cada mano respectivamente. Se le veía muy contenta, cantando mientras bailaba en la parada.
De repente, la chica gritó con la voz alta (no es necesario decir que grito con voz alta, está mal dicho, pero un grito ya se presupone que es fuerte) y me di cuenta de que habia perdido una calabaza había perdido y se le calló movido debajo de un auto (coche). Ella quería ir a escogerla pero se lo prohibió por su madre por la posibilidad que fuera atropellada (yo diría, se lo prohibió su madre porque estaba muy cerca de la carretera). De momento La pobrecita lloró como si hubiese perdido una perla.
Cuando el semáforo se puso verde, el autobús se marchó. La calabaza estaba bien. Sin embargo, otro detras pasó y precisamente estrelló aplastó a la calabaza. La chica lloró más por que ya sabía que su cosita fue destruida. Su madre le cafeteó su dejadez (no entiendo esta expresión), le dejó llorando.En este momento una persona un tio (tio: no se suele poner esta palabra escrita para referirse a una persona, si que es una expresión coloquial para hablar de alguien pero no de forma escrita. En este caso un tio seria el padre de mis primos) fue a escoger la calabaza. Se acercó mostándole a la chica que estaba bien así que la chica paró de llorar.
Admiraba a esta persona por su buen acto lo bien hecho y me pregunté a mi mismo por qué no tuve la idea de ayudar a la princesa.SIGUE ASI, INTENTA HACER FRASES MAS CORTAS Y REDACCIONES MAS CORTAS PARA QUE SEA MAS FACIL HACER LAS CORRECCIONES
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