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My name is Jacob. I live in the USA, in Tennessee. I am a native English speaker, and am working on learning Mandarin Chinese!
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    Be proud of yourself because you are doing the right thing.

    This is a story about my trip <s>in</s> to Germany.

    ("trip in Germany" sounds a little odd. "trip to Germany" sounds more natural, but you could also say something like "my time in Germany")

    Last year I stayed in Germany for two weeks. I stayed in a village <s>which</s> called Querfurt. I had such fun in this village - <s>such like </s> for instance, I looked after two dogs, fed them <s>foods</s>, and walked with them.

    <s>In this farm also have another volunteers</s> There were also other volunteers in this farm. I remember that <s>their</s> there <s>is</s> was an old man who <s>has</s> had been working as a builder. He told me about his life story and <s>shared</s> showed me <s>his</s> a picture of his young grandchild.

    ("shared me a picture" sounds very strange, I changed it to "showed me a picture" which sounds correct, but if you wanted to stick with using "share" you could also say "and shared a picture of his young grandchild with me")

    One <s>days</s> day he <s>looks</s> looked at me and <s>say</s> said, "You have to know how brave you are, you are so young and you will have an unbelievable future, however don't give up easily."

    ("however" does sound a little bit odd in that last part... I feel like I'd more naturally say something like "just don't give up easily", but however is still not grammatically incorrect I suppose)
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    As a native English speaker, I'd say "I always feel satisfied after attending your classes because I gain a lot of new knowledge every time." is more correct sounding! But other than that it sounds great!
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