Be proud of yourself because you are doing right thing.
This is a story about my trip in Germany.
Last year I stayed in Germany for two weeks, I stayed in a village which called Querfurt. I had such fun in this village, such like looked after two dogs fed them foods and walked with them.
In this farm also have another volunteers, I remember that their is an old man who has been working as a builder.He told me about his life story and shared me his picture of his young grandchild.
One days he looks at me and say you have to know how brave you are, you are so young and you will have an unbelievable future, however don't give up easily.
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Be proud of yourself because you are doing the right thing.
This is a story about my trip in to Germany.
("trip in Germany" sounds a little odd. "trip to Germany" sounds more natural, but you could also say something like "my time in Germany")
Last year I stayed in Germany for two weeks. I stayed in a village which called Querfurt. I had such fun in this village - such like for instance, I looked after two dogs, fed them foods, and walked with them.
("shared me a picture" sounds very strange, I changed it to "showed me a picture" which sounds correct, but if you wanted to stick with using "share" you could also say "and shared a picture of his young grandchild with me")
One days day he looks looked at me and say said, "You have to know how brave you are, you are so young and you will have an unbelievable future, however don't give up easily."
("however" does sound a little bit odd in that last part... I feel like I'd more naturally say something like "just don't give up easily", but however is still not grammatically incorrect I suppose)
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