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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Im want study Engish, becouse im like travel and becouse the English language very need in my work.
Привет Олег
Im is written like this I'm, and means I am.
Im want to study english should be, I want to study english
becouse im like travel should be. because I like travel
becouse the english language very need in my work should be because I need english very much in my work
0 votedJune 24, 20120Reflections...
Tomorrow in Russia will be an official holiday - "Independence Day of Russia."
This is a very strange holiday. Russians still do not know how to treat him and his correct name.
A few people understand what this holiday means, from whom or from which this independence? Most people have a negative attitude to this holiday and don't celebrate it.
Many in Russia today is very sad mood.
Recently, we have no democracy at all, it is impossible to say or write what you think. You can be fined. A fine may be as ten average salaries.
A lot of injustice.
Teachers, doctors and others who have a respectable profession receive very low salaries, which are almost impossible to survive. A very small pension.
If you're an honest business, then a lot of money don't earn.
The government has introduced a lot of unjust laws.
I would like to change a lot in our country, but I do not know how.Привет Kate
My corrections:
Russians still do not know how to treat him and his correct name.
Russians still do not know how to treat it and it's correct name – beware of online translators which cannot get certain word genders correct. The word 'it' is masculine and is often mistaken for 'him'
from whom or from which this independence?
From who or from what this independence is? - In English the question words beginning as WH are as follows
Whom is asking about what or which person or people as an (object)
Who is asking about what or which person (Subject)
Which is asking about choice – example which drink would you like, tea or coffee?
What is asking about information about something – what is your name?
Many in Russia today is very sad mood – the word 'is refers to Russia as a whole and to be correct would read: Russia toady is in a very sad mood
Many in Russia today are in a very sad mood is what you are wanting to write
A fine may be as ten average salaries.
His can be written two ways this is just up to the writer to choose
<ol> <li>A fine can be as big as ten average salaries
</li> </ol>or
<ol start="2"> <li>a fine can be ten times ( 10 x ) an average salary
</li> </ol>If you're an honest business, then a lot of money don't earn.
If you run an honest business, then you will not make a lot of money
I read with interest your reflections and find it very sad the way you live compared to life in the west. I can feel your frustrations in your writing. i watched with interest the changes in russia over the years with hope for the future of the people of russia but politically it has been tried before, what you want to achieve without success in the past. so like you do not know what the answer or solution is.
Я с интересом прочитал ваши размышления и найти его оченьпечально, как вы живете по сравнению с жизнью на Западе. Я могу чувствовать ваши разочарования в письменной форме. Яс интересом наблюдал перемены в России на протяжении многих лет с надеждой на будущее народов России, нополитически он был судим, что вы хотите достичь успеха, не в прошлом. так как вы не знаете, какой ответ или решение. Япризнаю, что я использовал онлайн-переводчик, чтобы попытаться сделать мои мысли немного легче для Вас, чтобычитать.C наилучшими пожеланиями Gary
0 votedJune 11, 20122I want find friends here
I want find friends here. We can help each other learn Languages. I am from in Russia
Очень хорошая попытка английски
I want to find friends here, when you write a statement that you want to do somthing you include the word to: I want to watch, I want to say, I want to go...
I am from in Russia
When you state where you a from you do not need to use the word 'in' unless you want to include a town or city. Example, I am from Russia in a city called Moscow
I hope you find this usefull and I would like to be your language partner if this helps
С очень уважением Gary
0 votedJune 11, 20120My work
I'm web designer and developer. I make templates and create websites.
I like my work because it is creative work and very interesting. But to achieve success, it is necessary to work much and infinitely to study.Hi Kate
<em> But to achieve success, it is necessary to work much hard and infinitely continue to study learn</em>.
hope this helps
0 votedJune 8, 20121First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I want to watch english-speaking films no translation. I feel like learning traditions and castomers others coutries.
Hello Tanya
This is a good first notebook entry,<em> </em>
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<em>I want to watch english-speaking films no translation. </em>
You need to include the words 'which have' as follows
I want to watch english-speaking films which have no translation.
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<em>I feel like learning traditions and castomers others coutries</em>.
I think you were trying to write
I feel like learning traditions and customs of other countries.
I hope this helps ;-)
0 votedJune 8, 20120
