First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I want to study Engish, becouse I like travel and  the English language very need in my work.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Im want study (1) Engish (2), becouse (3) im (4) like travel (5) and becouse the English language very need (6) in (7) my work.

I want to study English, because I like travelling and English (language) is very necessary for my work.

(1) "want" is a verb, so don't use it with to be verb. "Im want" is wrong --> "I want" is true. Following the verb "want", if it is a verb, you must add the word "to" between "want" and another word.

Ex: I want to study.

If following the verb "want" is a noun or pronoun, don't add the word "to". 

Ex: I want you ("you" is a pronoun)

     I want a pencil ( "a pencil" is a noun)

Want+to+ verb (infinitive) 

(4) Like is a verb, so "I like" not " Im like".

(6) Need is a verd, so don't use it with the word "very". Following "very" is the adjective or adverb. 

very necessary, very beautiful, very nice, very slowly...... 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Im want study Engish, becouse im like travel and becouse the English language very much in my work.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I want study Engish, becouse I like travel and becouse the English language very need in my work.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Im want study Engish, becouse im like travel and becouse the English language very need in my work.

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Im is written like this I'm, and means I am. 

Im want to study english  should be, I want to study english 

becouse im like travel should be. because I like travel

becouse the english language  very need in my work  should be because I need english very much in my work