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    30天的写作挑战:第二十三天

    大家好!我很喜欢嘻哈和说唱,其实我做了一个视频,一首汉语嘻哈歌的翻译。你可以看我的视频:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kBZGQi2ItEU&t=211s

    这首歌里的他经常说“hip hop”,我想知道说唱和嘻哈差别。我看了这个文章:https://zhuanlan.zhihu.com/p/42075745

    我觉得这个文章很好笑,信息丰富。它说说唱和嘻哈两个“都是爸妈不喜欢的音乐,但本质上还是有区别的!”😂 但是它也介绍了嘻哈和说唱的区别。现在我明白说唱是嘻哈音乐的一个类型或者要素。我很喜欢嘻哈,其实我的下个翻译视频会是一个西班牙语嘻哈歌。我认为嘻哈歌有点难翻译。“收敛水”很难翻译了。这个西班牙语嘻哈歌也很难翻译了。当我听嘻哈音乐的时候我感觉很有信心。其实, 如果我感觉紧张我会听嘻哈音乐,然后我感觉更有信心。一个面试之前我经常听嘻哈音乐。好, 我写作完了, 谢谢!

    Actually, we often say "嘻哈音乐"(Hip-hop music) or "说唱歌曲"(rap song) instead of "嘻哈歌".
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    July 24, 2020
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    Welcome Dear friends, On behalf of the Students’ Union, I would like to extend our warm welcome to all the international students. And it is my pleasure to proffer a number of practical suggestions for your campus life. First and foremost, you should contact your tutor right after the registration is done. They will be important roles in the next four years. Besides this, scientific activity can be beneficial to your graduate application, so you may want to join one via our online platform. If you have furthermore questions or confusions, feel free to call us during office time. We are looking forward to your arrival. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
    July 24, 2020
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    Financial aid to a child in a remote area To whom it may concern, I am a student who has been interested in Project Hope for a long time. And I have decided to find a child in an indigent region to make my donation. It would be appreciated if you can help me with this. First, I want to find someone in high school who is facing the stress of NCEE(National College Entrance Exam). Second, he or she should be the top 3% of the school, which leads to a high odd of entering a university. Besides these, the most important character is benevolence, a person who will make contributions to our society and the country. Finally, I would like to express my deepest respect for your incredible work. It would be an honor to be a part of this project. Yours sincerely Li Ming
    July 23, 2020
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    Invitation Dear Professors, On behalf of the student union, I would like to extend a warm invitation to you to attend our graduation ceremony. It would be an honor to have you as witnesses to the new chapter of our life.(Is it right to say so?) The ceremony begins at 6 p.m. on December 23 at the main hall. And there will be volunteers who lead you to your special seats. Then (Maybe other conjunction?) you can also require food and drink during the entire ceremony. Please reserve or contact us via telephone or email. I will follow up this invitation with a call in one week before the beginning of the ceremony. We hope that you will be able to join us for this event. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
    July 22, 2020
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    suggestions Dear President, I am a senior student who cares about the development of our university. First, I want to thank you for your work, I will not have such a fulfilled time without that. However, I have noticed that the physical condition of my peers is rather bad. And here are some suggestions for tackling the problem. One clear solution is doing more exercise. Although students need to run every day to get their sports credit, it is far from enough since they spend the rest of the day sitting. In addition to that, we should have more active sports events which encourage the students to practice, because the unhealthy situation will not be rectified unless they do sports willingly. Thanks for reading. It would be greatly appreciated if my suggestions are taken into consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
    July 20, 2020
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    suggestions To Whom It May Concern, I am writing to reveal the fact that there are some places where “white pollution” is still going on in spite of restrictions on plastic bags. And this situation should be rectified immediately. In my point of view, the use of plastic bags will reduce if we can find a substitute. And the paper bag is an ideal choice for its recyclability. Besides this, instead of offering free plastic bags, markets and retailers(I mean all the stores, Walmart, 7-11....is there a better way to express this?) should charge a higher price for them. After that, I am positive that plastic bags will be much less. Thanks for reading. It would be greatly appreciated if you put my opinions on our local newspaper. Yours sincerely, Li Ming ################################## change the words and phrases which you think are unnatural or informal. Thanks :)
    July 19, 2020
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    我们的宠物狗

    我们家有两只宠物狗。对我们来说,他们两个非常可爱。在这篇文字中,我想给你们介绍一下我的第一只狗。他叫“Toby”。

    10年前,我们收养了我们的第一只狗Toby。他是一只公狗,很小,不超过6公斤,是一个Pomeranian cross。那个时候他已经3岁了。所以现在,他已经13岁了。如果用狗年算,他已经比我大了。他的毛是棕色的,很长也很软软的。他睡觉的时候经常会做梦,会发出奇怪的声音。突然也会跳起来,让我们都很吃惊。

    他非常可爱。但是过了两个星期,出现了一些性格的问题(behaviour problems)。那个时候,他非常着急,也非常紧张,自信也不够。他以为他是我们的老板(you mean boss?),必须保护我们。因为每天我妻子或者我会喂他吃东西,所以对他,我们是这辈子最重要的人。别人不能靠近(靠近 sb. means get close to sb.)我们,尤其别人的狗。他会吵吵闹闹地让他们看到他的牙齿(tooth)。每天带他出去散散步真的太麻烦了,给我们带来很大压力。我们也不敢邀请亲友来我们的家。我受不了了。很多次,我和我老婆考虑是否应该把他还回去(return him to the shelter/ RSPCA)。

    后来,我在Youtube上做了一些研究。我想找有没有方法解决这些狗儿方面的问题。发现了有很多视频关于这个话题。我们花了几个月时间一步一步慢慢的才能解决了大部分的问题。

    现在呢,他很乖,很聪明也让我们当老板。他会明白英文的命令比如:Sit, Drop, Heel, Place,Free。他也会懂一点中文。如果我说:“Toby--来,”他一定会很快过来。他只是对别人的狗有点不太相信(相信means believe, 自信 means self-confidence)。

    我想,我不能怪我的狗。因为那时候我没有任何经验养狗,我也犯了一些错误。如果你们的宠物狗有这样的问题,不要那么容易放弃。我鼓励你们在上网努力做一点研究。这可能会带来很好的结果。

    在照片上:吃饭时间到了:) 。Toby在右边。

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    Some deletions I did not mark. Nice writing and you treat your dog well! He must be happy with you.
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    July 18, 2020
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    Forgot to return a CD Dear Bob, I have just come back for a few days, but miss you and the life in Canada already. Thanks again for your hospitality, I will never forget the experience in my lifetime.(I wanna say the experience was great, will the sentence sounds unnatural?) And I am writing the letter to apologize for mistaking your music CD which I should have returned before I left. However, I think it could be an opportunity to invite you to visit China. I will make sure you have a great time if you come, or I can just send you the CD by Express Mail Service. Please accept my sincere apology for any inconvenience my action may cause. Yours sincerely, Li Ming ################################### feel free to change the phrases and expressions if you want. I want the letter to be smooth. Thanks a lot for y'all help :)
    July 18, 2020
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    A Letter to university library Dear Sir or Madam, I am a student who visits the library whenever I have time. I have had lots of fun and learned so much from books. And I want to thank all the staff for keeping the library tidy and quiet. However, there are some suggestions I believe can be beneficial to the environment of the library. One of them is banning the foods, both the noise of eating and the smell is unbearable in the library. After all, having meals should be done in the dining hall. Besides, it will be nice to have more water coolers, since the current waiting time is longer than expected. Thanks for reading, I will be grateful if you can take my suggestions into consideration. ######################## change the phrases and the structure if you want! Thanks for helping :)
    July 17, 2020
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    我老公带姑姑去了商品展出室看装修新房的照明器材。 姑

    我老公带姑姑去了商品展出室看装修新房的照明器材。
    姑姑的房子打算8月底盖好。
    姑姑买了订做,接单生产的捷克豪华装修吊灯。
    她买了两个,一共90万日元。订做要四个月左右。
    然后我老公推着轮椅逛街了。
    姑姑很想吃高级的牛排,因为社交隔离所以在餐厅里排队的人很多。
    我老公想吃螃蟹。
    最后他们吃了酱乌冬面。
    姑姑很挑食,任性,老公走了5600步。
    照顾81岁的姑姑,很辛苦。
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    July 17, 2020
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