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To Whom It May Concern,
I am writing to reveal the fact that there are some places where “white pollution” is still going on in spite of restrictions on plastic bags. And this situation should be rectified immediately.
In my point of view, the use of plastic bags will reduce if we can find a substitute. And the paper bag is an ideal choice for its recyclability. Besides this, instead of offering free plastic bags, markets and retailers(I mean all the stores, Walmart, 7-11....is there a better way to express this?) should charge a higher price for them. After that, I am positive that plastic bags will be much less.
Thanks for reading. It would be greatly appreciated if you put my opinions on our local newspaper.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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To Whom It May Concern,
I am writing in response to the fact that there are some places where “white pollution” is still evident in spite of restrictions on plastic bags. This situation should be rectified immediately.
One clear solution is that the use of plastic bags will reduce if we can find a substitute. The paper bag is an ideal choice for its recyclability. In addition to this, instead of offering free plastic bags in markets and stores, retailers should be required to charge for each plastic bag. This change would encourage customers to bring reusable bags. With these simple changes, I am positive that plastic bag pollution will be significantly reduced.
Thanks for reading. It would be greatly appreciated if you would publish this piece in our local newspaper to help address the issue.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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