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My thoughts at the moment:

Okay, I was hesitating a lot before writing this composition because I didn`t have a topic.  Maybe I should write about my schedule these days.  Since I was employed at a bank, I've been really busy and tired.  There are many exams that I need to pass, many new things to learn, and many new workmates to get on well with. I spent my three months' holidays at home practising skills and expanding my financial knowledge.  However, I must say that competition is very fierce in China. I will spare no effort to strength my skills and prepare for my future.  Yesterday, I took a long exam, after which I feel very relaxed because now I only have one long test left.  Haha.  Life would be so good without tests.

 

Anyway, the weather in Chengdu these days is very nice, pleasant, and sunny.  I need someone to go outside with.  Thanks. :-)

 

Good luck! 

Serenity

 

I think he's a very clever student. I hope to become an English teacher. Good luck!

I have no time to think about my future

I love my life

I have no time to think about my future

Every day I am tired

Nobody knows my feelings

Sometimes i just want to give up my life for ease (what do you mean by that?) 

But i belive that it is the time for insisting (insisting what?)
 

I should give up what i don't like

and i should stick to what i like



on March 8 at home

Good job! :-)

I want to improve my english but not really sure if i'm good at idiomatic english. wanna try?