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my thoughts on the moment okey, i hesited a lot before i write this composition because i don`t have a topic.maybe i should say something about these days.after i was employed by the bank,i feel really busy and tired ,there are many exams need to pass,many new things to learn,many new workmates to get on well with.i spend 3month`s weekends at home practising skills and expanding my financial knowledge .however ,whatever can i say,competetion is much fiericely in china ,and doing things in a bank is not a bad choice.so i will spare no effort to strength my skills and prepare for my future.yesterday i finished a big exam and this make me relaxed a lot because i will have one last big test left now.haha~life is get so good without test. the weather in chengdu these days is very well,nice sunshines and colorful blossom,i need someone to go outside.

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My thoughts at the moment:

Okay, I was hesitating a lot before writing this composition because I didn`t have a topic.  Maybe I should write about my schedule these days.  Since I was employed at a bank, I've been really busy and tired.  There are many exams that I need to pass, many new things to learn, and many new workmates to get on well with. I spent my three months' holidays at home practising skills and expanding my financial knowledge.  However, I must say that competition is very fierce in China. I will spare no effort to strength my skills and prepare for my future.  Yesterday, I took a long exam, after which I feel very relaxed because now I only have one long test left.  Haha.  Life would be so good without tests.

 

Anyway, the weather in Chengdu these days is very nice, pleasant, and sunny.  I need someone to go outside with.  Thanks. :-)

 

Good luck! 

Serenity

 

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