The translation has not any obvious mistakes, but most of Chinese people do not speak like that. For instance, if you wanna make the title more attractive, you may say"几个步骤能让你的卖房变得更有价值", and this sentence 'Aesthetic factors are factors that can make your home becomes more expensive, here are the steps' I will translate it to '审美因素是其中之一,有这样几个方法'. 2. Cat .. 猫 和 3. spacious room .. 宽敞的房间 sounds like idiomatic Chinese, and other parts need to make better.