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steps to make a house more expensive (让房子变得更有购买价值的方法)
Basically, home prices are calculated from land and buildings, but there are some factors that you can do to make your home becomes more expensive. Aesthetic factors are factors that can make your home becomes more expensive, here are the steps:
(最根本上来讲,房屋价格应该从土地和建筑物两方面来计算的,但是有很多因素可以让你的房子变得更有购买价值起来,艺术也是其中一个,以下是方法:)
1. On the first page is mostly almost all saw something on the street, not too different from the home, first time buyers to see the view outside your home. They will pay attention to the whole front part of your home ground, grass and weeds Have better interest rates in order to look more attractive ..
(最开始看得你的房子是从街道的角度,而不是从家里内部,购买者首先会去观察你家的外部的环境,他们会注会注意你家房屋空地,草坪,杂草的整个前面部分,你应该注意这些细节让它们看起看迷人一点)
2. Cat .. 猫
Cat also includes one of the things that can form the buyers. Interior house paint is better to use neutral colors like white or beige ..
(猫也是吸引买家的一大法宝,房子内部的色调应该以素雅颜色为好,比如白色和米色)
3. spacious room .. 宽敞的房间
The spacious room, the buyer will be easier to think where they put their products, so call dispose of unneeded items .. 宽敞的房间会很容易让购买者产生一种如何放置家具的遐想,所以处理家里比较杂乱的地方,使房子变得宽敞起来。
4. air .. 空气
The house should at least have a window so the buyer can feel comfortable to breathe air. Window of the place and the air vents must be cleaned so that buyers are more interested to see it .. 房子至少要有一个窗户,这样可以带给购买者一种呼吸空气的舒适感,窗台和通风口处必须要十分干净,这样购买者会更加有兴趣去观看窗外的美景
5. cleanliness .. 清洁
Almost everyone is hoping to get the house tidy and clean, so clean your house before the show to prospective buyers. 几乎所有人都希望自己的房子整洁干净,所以在购买者来之前做次大扫除。
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没什么问题
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The translation has not any obvious mistakes, but most of Chinese people do not speak like that. For instance, if you wanna make the title more attractive, you may say"几个步骤能让你的卖房变得更有价值", and this sentence 'Aesthetic factors are factors that can make your home becomes more expensive, here are the steps' I will translate it to '审美因素是其中之一,有这样几个方法'.
2. Cat .. 猫 和 3. spacious room .. 宽敞的房间 sounds like idiomatic Chinese, and other parts need to make better.
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I can proofread this for you. All papers that I had to write in college were required to be proofread.
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1. 不要用“起来”,“起来”作补语时可以放在adj.的后面,比如“亮起来”等等,但它不能放在n.后面。
4. 第一句话可以直接说“房子至少要有一个窗户,这样购买者会觉得比较透气。”
以上供参考。。
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I am not going to correct it as it is your homework. it is good actually.
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