Hello, can you help me? please I'm preparing for an interview and would like your help with the following story. The purpose of the story is to show when I had to influence other people to achieve a common goal. is it well written? what changes would you make? any help is welcome. "When I was in college, I had to design a process, it was a team project. The team consisted of six people and most groups were only four people. We had to add extra steps to make up for the additional people in our team. The project took a year to complete and two of our classmates had to leave before the project was over. This incident affected us as a group and to solve it I had to make the decision to change the objective of the project to make it manageable. It was not an easy decision, as two of the other three members of the group were involved in that part of the project and for them it was a significant change, however, I had to make them see that the first objective was manageable for a group of six people but that it was very complicated for a team of four. I had to show them the benefits of the new lens. First, it was more novel than the original objective as other groups had developed similar ideas and this new direction showed the creativity of the group and we were covering a business that was not covered. And second, it allowed us to develop a manageable project for four people. Finally, we were able to develop a good project that allowed us to finish the course with an excellent grade."

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Practice six Hi! I litlle history: I'm a fish, I like to swim and discover new things. The other day a discovered something violet, I didn't now what it is, so a started a investigation. I discovered that the shape is strange because it doesn't look like anything I been see before, is like a triangule but whit a circule on top. The material is hard and taste bad (yes, I tried to eat it). So, now I know that is not for eat and has a strange shape. My friends say that it is something of the dry people, the people who breath aire. I going to investigate more. Bye

Practice five Hi! Second part of "Sopaipillas"'s recipe. I'm introducing "Sopaipillas pasadas"'s recipe. The "pasadas" part is when the "sopaipillas" are ready, after fried them. Is a sauce, like caramel. 1) Put in a cook pot 200 g of "chancaca"(*) with 400 ml of water. In this step you can add everything that you thing is tasty, like cinnamon, cloves, orange or lemon zest, vanilla (5 ml). Stir until the "chancaca" melt, and the mix boil. 2)Boil for about 15 minutes, stirring until the mixture is thick. 3)Bath the "sopaipillas" in this caramel and enjoy, is delicius if you it this warm. This step is why this dish is called "pasadas", you "pasas" the "sopaipillas" for this sauce. And here a picture how they look: https://media.biobiochile.cl/wp-content/uploads/2019/07/chancaca-deliciosa-delivery-5.jpeg Enjoy! (*)The "chancaca" is like a hard candy, tradicional in Latinamerica. In other contries it's call panela, rapadura, piloncillo, pepas dulces, papelón, raspadura, atado de dulce, etc.

Présentation personnelle ¿Cómo podría escribirlo para que suene más natural? (How could I write this to make it sound more natural?) Je m'appelle Javiera. J'ai 23 ans. Je suis étudiante. J'adore le chocolat et les livres. Je déteste la saleté. J'aime cuisiner, je le fais de temps en temps. J'aime lire des livres d'horreur. J'aime sortir pour le café et manger un gâteau. Ma journée commence à huit heures. Petit déjeuner à l'avoine. Ensuite, je vais en classe jusqu'à treize heures. Déjeuner à treize heures trente. Je rentre aux cours à quatorze heures trente jusqu'à dix-huit heures. Ensuite, je fais du yoga. Je dîne à vingt heures et je me couche à vingt-deux heures.

Practice four The past weekend I watched "IT chapter two", it was better than the "IT chapter one", but I missed some details like "Audra", Bill's wife. I think that the director try to incoorpored some things that miss in the first movie, like the club house. I liked that Stephen King show in the movie, nice touch. Wait for the second part of the "Sopaipillas"'s recipe. I'm searching for the best recipe of "Sopapillas pasadas", wait for it!