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    August 11, 2011
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    my skype my skype is bennett737...
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    some introduction of me i am bennett and com from china .i am 20,as a student i study electricity in my college .i wish i could be a Electrical Engineer in the future . i like badminten and play twice a week .lindan and zhangning are my favourite sporters.except badninten i also like to watch tennis ,but i dont play well.nali is a superhero in my mind .i love her so much .i love Roger Federer.too. he is so gentle .in my common life ,i prefer to listen to the music .rihanna.beyonce .usher.justin biber.katy perry .............they are all best singers. there i can recommend you the song of ccalifornia king bed byrihanna..you can try it . at last .i want to improve my english so i need your help .
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    August 3, 2011
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    关于我的手术。( Warning contains graphic medical content not for the squeamish type lol)

    (I could not fit all the English translation in due to the word limit, but have put the more confusing parts I had to write in.)

    昨天我做了个手术。我的手术叫双穿刺术腹腔镜。我必须很早到达医院,七点半钟!我妈妈陪着我去的医院,因为我不会开车,而且手术后,病人必须有人二十四小时陪着。手术之前我觉得很害怕,我真的不喜欢医院。不过, 所有的医生和护士都很好,他们都对我很温和。早上九点我被带到了手术室。我变得非常难过和害怕,我害怕我不会醒来,不会再看到我的孩子们。当一个护士握着我的手,静静地对我说安慰的话时,一个麻醉师给我注射了一针,几秒钟后我就失去知觉了。

    做双穿刺术腹腔镜手术时,一个妇科外科医师在我腹部开了两个小洞,一个在我的肚脐,另一个在我腹部低的左边。首先他们为了举起子宫,输卵管和卵巢,使他们远离其他器官把co2气体注入了我的身体, 然后外科医师为了能看得更清楚一点。把一个微小的相机被插进了腹部, 通过它,看看是否能够找到问题是什么。Double-puncture laparoscopy involves a gynecological surgeon making two small holes in my abdomen, one in my belly button, the other in my lower left abdomen. First they pumped co2 gas into my body to lift the uterus, fallopian tubes and ovaries away from the other organs, so the surgeon can see more clearly. Then a tiny camera is inserted into the abdomen so the doctor can have a good look all around to see if they can find out what the problem is.

    他们发现我的问题。由于九年前剖腹产,我的右卵巢上结了粘连。这些年来,它粘在我的肠子和周围的组织让我感到疼痛。外科医师小心地用一把刀和一个激光器清理了它,最后他们用steri strips使那两洞闭合。
    They found my problem. Because of my caesarean section nine years ago, adhesions had formed on my right ovary. Over the years, it became stuck to my bowel and the surrounding tissue causing me pain. The surgeon carefully released everything using a knife and a laser, afterwards they used steri strips to close up the holes.

    当我被唤醒的时候,我觉得很害怕。因为我感觉我的肚子里疼痛, 而且我不知道我在那里。但是护士给我止疼药后,我很快好起来。几个小时后我离开医院。我花了一天时间在我妹妹的房子,最后在我妈妈的房子睡觉了。

    这个早上我回到我的房子了。 我尝试学习点中文, 我开始写这个文章,但到了下午我觉得很疲劳,我的肚子痛得厉害,因为在我的身体里还有co2气体,而且我的肩膀真疼,所以我在沙发上睡了整整一下午。下午五点半钟我才起床了,我不想做饭所以妈妈给我带来了晚餐。然后今晚我把这个文章写完了。我还感到疼,加上我依然觉得有点头昏眼花(groggy/not with it),所以我觉得这个文章中会有很多错误。但是我还想过尝试写它,因为对我来说,每天学习中文是非常重要的!希望你能明白我的意思和可以改正我的错误

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    August 3, 2011
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    今天的事情

    今天我不忙。我很早下班了,然后我与同事一起吃了午饭。我们聊天聊了一小时。我觉得有趣极了。

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    August 3, 2011
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    大家好,我的名字叫做艾伦,现在住在中国,我会一点儿中文,希望有中文教师帮我学习汉语。

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    August 3, 2011
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    大家好!
    我叫Brett,我的中文名字是穆博聽。我學中文差不多学了一年半,因為我對這种語言很有興趣,所以我需要你們的幫助来把它學好。

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    August 3, 2011
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    我的中文功课

    这是我第一次写这个,如果有错,请你们告诉我。 今天早上,我六点多就起床了。我起床后收拾了一下床。然后我就去洗澡。洗完澡大概六点十五分,我就去楼下吃早餐。大概六点四十五分钟我去上学。
    那天中午,我们在学校里要学中文。首先我们的老师教我们这么用中文写一到十,然后,他又教我们这么数汉字字的笔画。老师刚解释给我们后,我就明白了一点怎么数汉字的笔画。原来没我想的那么难。

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    August 2, 2011
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    there is no if

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    August 2, 2011
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