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关于我的手术。( Warning contains graphic medical content not for the squeamish type lol) (I could not fit all the English translation in due to the word limit, but have put the more confusing parts I had to write in.) 昨天我做了个手术。我的手术叫双穿刺术腹腔镜。我必须到达医院很早,七点半种!我妈妈陪着我去医院,是因为我不会开车和手术后,病人必须有某人陪着他们二十四小时。手术以前我觉得很害怕,我真的不喜欢医院。不过, 所有的医生和护士都是很好的人,他们都对我很温柔。早上九点我被带到了手术室。我变得非常难过和害怕,我害怕我不会醒来,不会再看到我的孩子们。当一个护士握着我的手,静静地对我说安慰的话时,一个麻醉师给我注射了一针,几秒钟后我就失去知觉了。 双穿刺术腹腔镜包括一个妇科外科医师在我腹部开了两颗小洞,一颗在我的肚脐,另一个在我腹部低的左边。首先他们把co2气体抽入我的身体为了举起子宫,输卵管和卵巢远离另器官, 所以外科医师能看得更清楚一点。然后一个微小的相机被插进了腹部所以医生可以到四周看, 看看是否它们能够找到问题是什么。Double-puncture laparoscopy involves a gynecological surgeon making two small holes in my abdomen, one in my belly button, the other in my lower left abdomen. First they pumped co2 gas into my body to lift the uterus, fallopian tubes and ovaries away from the other organs, so the surgeon can see more clearly. Then a tiny camera is inserted into the abdomen so the doctor can have a good look all around to see if they can find out what the problem is. 他们发现我的问题。由于九年前剖腹产,我的右卵巢上结了粘连。这些年来,它变得粘在我的肠子和周围的组织让我感到疼痛。外科医师小心地松开了一切用一把刀和一个激光器,然后他们用steri strips为了闭合那两洞。 They found my problem. Because of my caesarean section nine years ago, adhesions had formed on my right ovary. Over the years, it became stuck to my bowel and the surrounding tissue causing me pain. The surgeon carefully released everything using a knife and a laser, afterwards they used steri strips to close up the holes. 当我唤醒的时候,我觉得很害怕。我在我肚子里感到疼痛, 加上我不知道我在那里。但是护士给我止疼药,然后我很快好起来。几个小时后我离开医院。我花一天在我妹妹的房子,然后在我妈妈的房子睡觉了。 这个早上我回到我的房子了。 我尝试学习点中文, 我开始写这个文章,但到了下午我觉得很疲劳,我的肚子痛得厉害和因为在我的身体里还有co2气体我的肩膀真疼,所以我在沙发上睡了整整一下午。下午五点半钟我才起床了,妈妈给我带来了晚餐因为我不想做饭。然后今晚我把这个文章写完了。我还感到疼,加上我依然觉得有点头昏眼花(groggy/not with it),所以我想像这个文章中会有很多错误。但是我还想过尝试写它,因为对我来说,学习中文每天是非常重要的!希望你还能明白我的意思和可以原谅我的错误

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关于我的手术。( Warning contains graphic medical content not for the squeamish type lol)

(I could not fit all the English translation in due to the word limit, but have put the more confusing parts I had to write in.)

昨天我做了个手术。我的手术叫双穿刺术腹腔镜。我必须到达医院很早,七点半钟!我妈妈陪着我去医院,是因为我不会开车和手术后,病人必须有某人陪着他们二十四小时。手术以前我觉得很害怕,我真的不喜欢医院。不过, 所有的医生和护士都是很好的人,他们都对我很温柔。早上九点我被带到了手术室。我变得非常难过和害怕,我害怕我不会醒来,不会再看到我的孩子们。当一个护士握着我的手,静静地对我说安慰的话时,一个麻醉师给我注射了一针,几秒钟后我就失去知觉了。

双穿刺术腹腔镜包括一个妇科外科医师在我腹部开了两颗小洞,一颗在我的肚脐,另一个在我腹部低的左边。首先他们把co2气体抽入我的身体为了举起子宫,输卵管和卵巢远离另器官, 所以外科医师能看得更清楚一点。然后一个微小的相机被插进了腹部所以医生可以到四周看, 看看是否它们能够找到问题是什么。Double-puncture laparoscopy involves a gynecological surgeon making two small holes in my abdomen, one in my belly button, the other in my lower left abdomen. First they pumped co2 gas into my body to lift the uterus, fallopian tubes and ovaries away from the other organs, so the surgeon can see more clearly. Then a tiny camera is inserted into the abdomen so the doctor can have a good look all around to see if they can find out what the problem is.

他们发现我的问题。由于九年前剖腹产,我的右卵巢上结了粘连。这些年来,它变得粘在我的肠子和周围的组织让我感到疼痛。外科医师小心地松开了一切用一把刀和一个激光器,然后他们用steri strips为了闭合那两洞。
They found my problem. Because of my caesarean section nine years ago, adhesions had formed on my right ovary. Over the years, it became stuck to my bowel and the surrounding tissue causing me pain. The surgeon carefully released everything using a knife and a laser, afterwards they used steri strips to close up the holes.

当我被唤醒的时候,我觉得很害怕。我在我肚子里感到疼痛, 加上我不知道我在那里。但是护士给我止疼药,然后我很快好起来。几个小时后我离开医院。我花一天在我妹妹的房子,然后在我妈妈的房子睡觉了。

这个早上我回到我的房子了。 我尝试学习点中文, 我开始写这个文章,但到了下午我觉得很疲劳,我的肚子痛得厉害和因为在我的身体里还有co2气体我的肩膀真疼,所以我在沙发上睡了整整一下午。下午五点半钟我才起床了,妈妈给我带来了晚餐因为我不想做饭。然后今晚我把这个文章写完了。我还感到疼,加上我依然觉得有点头昏眼花(groggy/not with it),所以我想像这个文章中会有很多错误。但是我还想过尝试写它,因为对我来说,学习中文每天是非常重要的!希望你还能明白我的意思和可以原谅我的错误

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you did a very good work .the article is quite well .but i think you should have a good rest to keep you body in a good condition .加油!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!你会做得更好!!!!
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关于我的手术。( Warning contains graphic medical content not for the squeamish type lol)

(I could not fit all the English translation in due to the word limit, but have put the more confusing parts I had to write in.)

昨天我做了个手术。我的手术叫双穿刺术腹腔镜。我必须很早到达医院,七点半钟!我妈妈陪着我去的医院,因为我不会开车,而且手术后,病人必须有人二十四小时陪着。手术之前我觉得很害怕,我真的不喜欢医院。不过, 所有的医生和护士都很好,他们都对我很温和。早上九点我被带到了手术室。我变得非常难过和害怕,我害怕我不会醒来,不会再看到我的孩子们。当一个护士握着我的手,静静地对我说安慰的话时,一个麻醉师给我注射了一针,几秒钟后我就失去知觉了。

做双穿刺术腹腔镜手术时,一个妇科外科医师在我腹部开了两个小洞,一个在我的肚脐,另一个在我腹部低的左边。首先他们为了举起子宫,输卵管和卵巢,使他们远离其他器官把co2气体注入了我的身体, 然后外科医师为了能看得更清楚一点。把一个微小的相机被插进了腹部, 通过它,看看是否能够找到问题是什么。Double-puncture laparoscopy involves a gynecological surgeon making two small holes in my abdomen, one in my belly button, the other in my lower left abdomen. First they pumped co2 gas into my body to lift the uterus, fallopian tubes and ovaries away from the other organs, so the surgeon can see more clearly. Then a tiny camera is inserted into the abdomen so the doctor can have a good look all around to see if they can find out what the problem is.

他们发现我的问题。由于九年前剖腹产,我的右卵巢上结了粘连。这些年来,它粘在我的肠子和周围的组织让我感到疼痛。外科医师小心地用一把刀和一个激光器清理了它,最后他们用steri strips使那两洞闭合。
They found my problem. Because of my caesarean section nine years ago, adhesions had formed on my right ovary. Over the years, it became stuck to my bowel and the surrounding tissue causing me pain. The surgeon carefully released everything using a knife and a laser, afterwards they used steri strips to close up the holes.

当我被唤醒的时候,我觉得很害怕。因为我感觉我的肚子里疼痛, 而且我不知道我在那里。但是护士给我止疼药后,我很快好起来。几个小时后我离开医院。我花了一天时间在我妹妹的房子,最后在我妈妈的房子睡觉了。

这个早上我回到我的房子了。 我尝试学习点中文, 我开始写这个文章,但到了下午我觉得很疲劳,我的肚子痛得厉害,因为在我的身体里还有co2气体,而且我的肩膀真疼,所以我在沙发上睡了整整一下午。下午五点半钟我才起床了,我不想做饭所以妈妈给我带来了晚餐。然后今晚我把这个文章写完了。我还感到疼,加上我依然觉得有点头昏眼花(groggy/not with it),所以我觉得这个文章中会有很多错误。但是我还想过尝试写它,因为对我来说,每天学习中文是非常重要的!希望你能明白我的意思和可以改正我的错误

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Infact I am off to do the shopping in a minute!
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lol, Thanks for the concern but I'm not dying Andrew, Id rather be sitting sitting studying than lying down staring at the ceiling doing naff all! Complete rest, that doesnt happen, I must look after my kids too, cant do that lying down!

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