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はじめまして!私はタルラです。大学で日本語を勉強します。
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    hello everybody ! You can call me Bella . I'm grow[ing] up in Chengdu and I want to improve my English .I hope [y]You can help me ,and I can help you to study Chinese and Chinese culture. if you want to know me ,please [contact] contect with me .

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    Today, I met a kind clothing saler

    Today,my [mum]  mam and I [hung] hang out [at] to the center,and [we] went up to the second floor of a clothing building.we went into one of them randomly.I noticed this clothing shop named Foreign Trade Clothing.The saler's big smile gave us a good first impression.I looked around [at] the [clothing] clothings to be [sold] selled,and I [didn't feel] felt not so bad,many of them [were] are colorful,which I pretty [liked] like.Seeing my hesitation for choosing, she began to introduce her clothings.Firsrly,she let me look some upper cottas,whith looked very exaggerated and cute.She encouraged me to [try it on] have a try to it, I did.When I saw the effect,I felt [that it was] it's quite different from what I [usually wear] was before,but I [was] very satisfied with the match she arranged. She said,"Girls must be girls!your waist is quite slender!And then, [you] have [to] try to this one...". Then she gave me another style of T-shirt,and let me [enter] entry the fitting room. when I was trying [the clothes] on in the fitting room,I heard the [sales assistant] saler [talking] talked to my mother. "I have a dauther,who is as old as yours.your dauther is a college student,right?""Yeah."My mother replied.”"Coedna can wear many kinds of clothings!My dauther is not so [skinny] skiny,but she wears [them] quite well,because she has found her [personal style] way of wearing.Your dauther is not fat as you said.She has such structure [because] for granted for she is tall enouge.Encourage her to be confident!"What [she] her said let me find [my] the confidence agin!
    ...After trying [the clothes on],I wanted to buy some,for I quite [liked] like them, but [I was] [poor] poorer and I [couldn't] can't afford them.The [friendly] frendly  [sales assistant] saler [was] still be smilling,and said again and again,"Just think nothing of it,I just want you to have a change!"Her words [touched] touchde me deeply.

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    August 8, 2011
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    because sometimes public transport is bad so it is more convenient to have a private car.
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    August 8, 2011
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    こんにちわ! 私はアイトキの新しいメムバです。日本語はめっちゃ難しいそう! だれも日本語を勉強しているか?
    August 8, 2011
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