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Today, I met a kind clothing saler Today,my mam and I hang out to the center,and went up to the second floor of a clothing building.we went into one of them randomly.I noticed this clothing shop named Foreign Trade Clothing.The saler's big smile gave us a good first impression.I looked around the clothings to be selled,and I felt not so bad,many of them are colorful,which I pretty like.Seeing my hesitation for choosing,she began to introduce her clothings.Firsrly,she let me look some upper cottas,whith looked very exaggerated and cute.She encouraged me to have a try to it,I did.When I saw the effect,I felt it's quite different from what I was before,but I very satisfied with the match she arranged.She said,"Girls must be girls!your waist is quite slender!And then,have a try to this one..."Then she gave me another style of T-shirt,and let me entry the fitting room.when I was trying on in the fitting room,I heard the saler talked to my mother,"I have a dauther,who is as old as yours.your dauther is a college student,right?""Yeah."My mother replied.”"Coedna can wear many kinds of clothings!My dauther is not so skiny,but she wears quite well,because she has found her way of wearing.Your dauther is not fat as you said.She has such structure for granted for she is tall enouge.Encourage her to be confident!"What her said let me find the confidence agin! ...After trying,I wanted to buy some,for I quite like them,but poorer and I can't afford them.The frendly saler still be smilling,and said again and again,"Just think nothing of it,I just want you to have a change!"Her words touchde me deeply.

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Today, I met a kind clothing saler

Today,my [mum]  mam and I [hung] hang out [at] to the center,and [we] went up to the second floor of a clothing building.we went into one of them randomly.I noticed this clothing shop named Foreign Trade Clothing.The saler's big smile gave us a good first impression.I looked around [at] the [clothing] clothings to be [sold] selled,and I [didn't feel] felt not so bad,many of them [were] are colorful,which I pretty [liked] like.Seeing my hesitation for choosing, she began to introduce her clothings.Firsrly,she let me look some upper cottas,whith looked very exaggerated and cute.She encouraged me to [try it on] have a try to it, I did.When I saw the effect,I felt [that it was] it's quite different from what I [usually wear] was before,but I [was] very satisfied with the match she arranged. She said,"Girls must be girls!your waist is quite slender!And then, [you] have [to] try to this one...". Then she gave me another style of T-shirt,and let me [enter] entry the fitting room. when I was trying [the clothes] on in the fitting room,I heard the [sales assistant] saler [talking] talked to my mother. "I have a dauther,who is as old as yours.your dauther is a college student,right?""Yeah."My mother replied.”"Coedna can wear many kinds of clothings!My dauther is not so [skinny] skiny,but she wears [them] quite well,because she has found her [personal style] way of wearing.Your dauther is not fat as you said.She has such structure [because] for granted for she is tall enouge.Encourage her to be confident!"What [she] her said let me find [my] the confidence agin!
...After trying [the clothes on],I wanted to buy some,for I quite [liked] like them, but [I was] [poor] poorer and I [couldn't] can't afford them.The [friendly] frendly  [sales assistant] saler [was] still be smilling,and said again and again,"Just think nothing of it,I just want you to have a change!"Her words [touched] touchde me deeply.

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