First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm Ivan Zhodik. I am from Belarus. I study philosophy. I like music, books, cinema, travels. I study this language because I want to become better.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi my name is Jone, and I'm from Quebec. I am 23 years old, and I want to learn english because it's the universale langage. and I want to be good when I go to the Usa.

 Very good! Just a few small grammar problems! :D

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm a 24-year-old brazilian, I will stay I am staying in Toronto for the next 5 months to improve my English and to know meet new people.
I arrived on July 6th, in this time I knew learned the city, and last week I started my English classes.
I think it is very difficult to learn English, and for this I need your help.

Great job!! :D

How do I handle stress and pressure?

Nowadays, our jobs and life styles can easily cause a lot of stress to people, there’s no doubt this generation is too pressed to achieve their goals and grow a competitive and proactive personality. But (Don't start a sentence with "and" "but" or "or") This has a very high price to pay. It’s well known that stress is the main cause of a lot of diseases, both mental and physical, that’s why recently there’s a big concern of getting a balance in life, and people is wanted to have ways to handle stress and pressure.

By my side (what do you mean by this? It is not necessary in the sentence), one of the things I recommend to achieve (achieve what?) this is: keep contact to(this makes sense, but you would want to say "Spend time with nature") nature. In my free time I like to get away from those things that generate stress, I like to get my bike and have a ride far away from city and its jams (traffic is a better word choice), pollution, crowded places, and other stressed people. It’s necessary to change from time to time that unhealthy environment for one full of trees, birds, rivers, waterfalls and animals. We should be grateful that we can find those easily. Also, stress can simply fade out by exercising, our body is a complex machine designed to keep moving, effortless actions just like walking can bring great benefits to our body.

Thanks anyone who spends time to read and correct this.

This is fantastic!!! Just one or two gramatical errors, and a few word choice problems, but this is REALLY good!! :D

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, everyone. I am an outgoing boy. I like making friends with others. Recently, I want to get make some foreign friends. Not only to practice my English, but also to know more about culture about foreign countrie's cultures. I'm waiting for my friends!!

Remember to put a space between the end of your sentence, and the beginning of a next.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

HELLO,I AM A CHINESE GIRL,I AM IN HARBIN,I WANT TO MAKE FRIEND ,TEACH LANGUAGE EACH OTHER.

Hello, I am a Chinese girl. I am in Harbin. I want to make friends, and teach languages to each other.

Your sentences don't need to be capitalized. :) Great job!