Hi! 

I use chopsticks for almost everything, too! Coming from an Asian household, I was accustomed to using chopsticks from a young age. I think chopsticks are super convenient and very useful. 

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I watched an American’s TV series called Carrie Diaries. Carrie’ Diary, There are some impressive movie lines: as following.

“When my power is pure and young, I am foolish, I sold my power. Never let others make your decisions, own your power. ”

“Everyone may think it is a good idea, but I don’t. That’s me owning my power.”

“If I didn’t define who I was and what I wanted, somebody else would.”

I like these sentences. In this busy and fast world, we must find ourselves who we are, rather than ask others,. They are not the worms in our stomachs and in most cases, they would likely to give you a hasty or false answer, for to destroying the confidence of potential competitors., at the Meanwhile, they insist, as the sophisticated and experienced experts, that what they said is authoritative and completely right without any doubt.

Hi, 

So you have a few mistakes here and there, but not bad. However, your original sentence, beginning with "in this busy and fast world...", was extremely long and is called a run-on sentence. These types of sentences are considered incorrect. Also, you never mentioned what or who "they" is referring to when you said "they are not the worms in our stomachs...".

:D