自己介绍

大家好！ 我是大学2年级，中文系的学生（很地道）。学了（习）汉语20个月左右了。
我喜欢学习外（国）语，英语、日语也在一起学习。虽然我的个性是比较内向（的）， 太害羞， 但是过了一段时间就变得非常活泼。我的爱好是看外国的电视剧，常常在网上看电视剧或者电影，还有我喜欢听音乐,特别喜欢rock风的。（这句用的很地道啊。）

我上次暑假1个月（的时间）去了中国，在上海外大学了汉语。
我在那儿过得很好，可以的话什么时候去中国留学。
但是我的汉语不流畅，希望大家好好帮我。谢谢。

ps:算是很不错的了,有两个地方个人觉得用的很地道，很好。意思也表达的比较清楚。继续加油吧。

i like china and china's ancient buildings,but our streets are dirty and our new buildings are all in the same key.no emotion no innovation ,expensive to death,Ugly to death.Don't delicate.once i saw a tourism programs in Japan on tv. at antique streets, berore a shop have a little goldfish pond ,The water lotus blooming silence.very beauty Very elegant ,l think that match up china's style .so l hope one day china's ancient buildings and style will return .and people have time to Create beauty.Spend time in the so-called "useless things"

leave1000000 to live .the rest of money ,Half of it , establish a welfare fund for china's old people ,because the old man in China always lack of respect and the social welfare fund for old people not gain popularity ,they must rely on his children.if they are childern not so good .they will be  very poor.and this situation derived a lot of other social problems.the other half .to protecet of China's ancient buildings. everywhere skyscrapers under construction in china,sometimes will be sacrificed many ancient buildings.and chinese people only care about economic .very terrible.

矫枉过正

and  this question let me remind a girl .She used to be my very good friend.In the meet her before,i was disappointed to friendship and  peers、not friendly classmates.but she is very clever very patient girl.i think she  handed me attitude towards the life, and how to love others.i think it is very important. Later, we because some things apart,and friendship can`t continue.but I know she's a so nice person,I'm glad that I met her，and l also love her very much .she gave me the good things will accompany with my whole life.