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    心很奇怪

    The heart is strange 

    每次心对于不属于它的东西会有所渴望;

    Each time the heart desires for things that do not belong to it. 

    今天你是我的,但是明天你将会离我远去,我的心知道会很痛

    Today you are mine, but tomorrow you will leave me and my heart knows that it will be hurt

    但它依然的好奇,继续的去想,仿佛是必须的一样

    But it still wonders, and continues to think, more than what is necessary.

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    This is my first day in this website. Six months ago,My wife with i came to Australia. We want our child grow up in Australia on the future. First year,we need ready everything . My wife have got job because she English is good.But my English is so poor. Yesterday,i Received a phone call about interview.but i didn't understand he told anything.I answered with him to send me a email.he said "OK". But i don't Receive any email until now. Jimmy 24/6/2011
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    心很奇怪。

    心很奇怪。她每次喜欢的东西,他不是都不属于他的。今天你是我的可是明天你会离开。我的新心知道她我明天会伤心。可是她还在想还还是在想她,太多的想一想很想很想。

     

    I think you want to express this meaning?

    Heart is very strange.
    Every time she likes something, do not belong to him. today you are my,but  tomorrow you will leave. My heart to know I'll be sad on tomorrow. But i  still miss  her, very miss.

     

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    June 24, 2011
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    心很奇怪。

    心很奇怪。她每次喜欢东西他不是他的。今天你是我的可是明天你会离开。我的新心知道她明天会伤心。可是她还在想,太多的想一想。

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    你好我的朋友中国人!!

    你好 :)

    我的名字是李耀龙! 我已经在上海9个月了。 我不聪明但是我要学习中文!! 我不是很聪明,但我还是希望努力学习英文;(maybe this sentence better)


    拜拜!(this time ues 谢谢. will be better )

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    你好我的朋友中国人!!

    你好 :)

    我的名字是李耀龙! 我已经在上海9个月了。 我不聪明但是我要学习中文!!

    拜拜!

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