writing task 1. Cambridge 14. describing a map
These two maps illustrate how a park site has developed since 1920. Overall, the park has been modernized with extensive developments including the construction of recreational facilities for adults and children. All the original parts, except a rose garden, has been demolished. The new decoration has change the park layout significantly.
In 1920, there was a fountain located in the center of the park which was replaced with a large rose garden surrounded by four seating areas. On the left side, a stage for music performances was demolished to construct a large and modern amphitheater place. On the top right hand corner, there was a pond and a rose garden which has turned into a playground area for children and a café. On the opposite side, a Glasshouse next to southern entrance has been replaced with a water feature. Also, in order to access the underground parking lot, seats have been removed.
On the top left hand corner, not much has changed considerably. Two seating areas around the rose garden have been removed, while at the bottom, the rose garden and seating area have been removed to make enough space for amphitheater.
Overall it was good! Mostly I just removed some words as it can come across too 'wordy' and they are not needed. Hope this helps!