Henry's Class

I was checking the last note I made and I found that I was misspelling words a lot. I'm sorry about that, it was because I was rushing when I wrote the notes so I didn't check it completely. Anyway, I'll start to explain about my book.

Sam went to Ron's brother's party. The day was very cold and snowy and that's why Sam wore pants and her jumper. However, when she arrived she saw that all the other girls were wearing dresses.  At first, Sam spoke to Ron using sign language and then Ron left her to speak to the other partygoers. Sam decided to go outside, because it was too hot indoors, and it was there that Sam found a man who was to be her lover...

Good work! You have excellent English and I like your use of retell words, such as "at first" and "then"!

I Finished Reading.

I had a lot of free time today, so I decided to read all 120 pages of the story "A Dog of Flanders". I enjoyed the story, though it made me sad. The story is about a boy called Nello, who has had a hard life. These hardships include being framed for arson and the death of his grandfather. Finally, he has a lost everything except for his dog, Patrasche, who is always with him. When he passed away, he was locked in an embrace with his dog. One thing that I learned from this story is that adults are too late to notice some things.

*I wasn't sure how to interpret "being steal his work", so I didn't include it. Fantastic work overall, you have a great understanding of the comma!