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I finished reading. A Dog of Flanders has about 120 pages. I have a lot of free time today, so I read all in one go. This story made me sad. I like it. Nello, a boy,have received bad treatment. Such as being steal his work, framing him up for arsonist and dying his grand father. Finally he lost everythings except for his dog.Patrasche is always with him. He passed away with huging his dog. Adults are too late to notice something, so I learn something more deeply.

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I Finished Reading.

I had a lot of free time today, so I decided to read all 120 pages of the story "A Dog of Flanders". I enjoyed the story, though it made me sad. The story is about a boy called Nello, who has had a hard life. These hardships include being framed for arson and the death of his grandfather. Finally, he has a lost everything except for his dog, Patrasche, who is always with him. When he passed away, he was locked in an embrace with his dog. One thing that I learned from this story is that adults are too late to notice some things.


*I wasn't sure how to interpret "being steal his work", so I didn't include it. Fantastic work overall, you have a great understanding of the comma!

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I finished reading.

A Dog of Flanders has about 120 pages. I had a lot of free time today, so I read it all in one go. This story made me sad. I like it. Nello, a boy,has received bad treatment. Such as his work being stolen, being framed for being an arsonist and his grandfather dying. Finally he lost everythings except for his dog. Patrasche is always with him. He passed away hugging his dog. Adults are too late to notice some things, so I am learning some things more deeply.

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Thank you so much!

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