Essay #3 Kindly correct the grammar please.

*Practice writing for my exam: Letter to the press*

Dear Sir,

I read with interest your article on workers who are about to lose their jobs and I would like to express my views on the subject.

First of all, I find it extremely worrying as many families will lose their occupation. Not only will it <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">have</s> financially impact <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">on</s> them, but also emotionally. For instance, being unemployed will make you think about <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">put you into thinking on</s> how could you provide your family. Some of them, may not have enough savings so they would have to find new job as soon as possible. Moreover, it will also affect the economy of our area. As great numbers of people will be laid off soon, this could lead to <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">a</s> negative economic growth.

On the other hand, it is true that by using high-tech machinery, the work can be done more cheaply. Nevertheless, <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">but</s> it has also consequences for the environment. It can raise the climate change that we are already facing now. Another interesting point is that working with people is more appealing than working with machines. Helping other people and having colleagues gives <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">the</s> a feeling of satisfaction.

In conclusion, I believe such an important issue deserves more consideration as it involves not only every person who works <s>t</s>here but the whole community as well.

Yours faithfully,

*insert name here*