Dreaming of Rock
Hello Readers! Welcome to the Space of Music. Today we are talking about the one of most important events <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">about</s> in music: Rock in Rio.
The last concert<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">s</s> started 28 September and <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">ending</s> ended 6 October <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">in </s>2019 in Rio de Janeiro.This event<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> is </s> was so famous that a lot of people came to Rio de Janeiro just to watch their favorite band. The event was a success, with many participating bands. (?) <s>and with many bands come to participate thi edicion </s>
I <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">W </s>would like to tell you a little about the <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">bigger mind</s> mastermind behind <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">this</s> it all : Roberto Medina. <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">, </s>tThis man was responsible<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> to create</s> for creating this event in 1985. At that time perhaps he <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">doesn't </s>did not have any idea how <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">is this evento</s> the event would be nowadays, but he had the courage <s>and began</s> to begin Rock in Rio. <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">One of interviews on tv in the past he told was complicated because he was a very hard internacional Star of rock going to south america that time. </s>In one of his past TV interviews, he told the story of problems he had with a difficult rock star traveling to South America at that time. (?)
<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">The Rock in rio should be one of the most concert famous this world</s> Rock in Rio should be one of the most famous concerts in the world. <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">everyone wished go there one day,</s>Everyone wants to go there someday. This event <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">begin</s> began with just a simple idea and <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">became </s>has become so popular<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">.</s><s> </s><s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> Roberto Medina this man we can probably conclude that become a legend. </s>We can probably conclude that Roberto Medina has become a legend.
Great job, and greetings from the United States! Your entry makes me want to attend Rock in Rio. I wasn't sure what your intent was in a couple of places- if you would like to give me more specifics regarding what you would like to say, I would be happy to help.