day one
my name is Ranger and today is the first day for me to write a English journal in italk network station ,i feel a little nervious.because i never try to write something to show in front of so many people,i think i will get used to it as soon as possible ,i am a chinese undergraduate.as for me,all the thing i can do is study for my future ,it is boring,so i want to look spmething new to enrich myself,that is why i will learn English in this website,i hope i would have a good time in here,make some friends and get something about English
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Day One
My name is Ranger. and Today is the first day for me to write a English journal my first journal entry (clearer expression) in italk on italki. network station, . I feel a little nervious nervous because i never try I have never tried to write something anything to show in front of to so many people. , I think that I will get used to it as soon as possible. I am a Chinese undergraduate. as for me,all the thing i can do All I do is study for my future, . It is boring,so I want to look spmething find something new to enrich myself, . That is why I am going to will (clearer expression) learn English in on this website. I hope i would that I will have a good time in on here, make some friends, and get something about learn English.
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