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我人生所期望的全部,不外乎八个字:平安、健康、幸福、快乐~很简单,但是也很难~ what I really want , no more than the four words: peace, health, safety and happiness. really simple, but difficult,too~
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    我们去水族馆游记(句子没有错,但这样修改一下更适合当标题)

    这个两天我和老公一起去旅行。
    因为天气很好,所以驱车兜风很快乐。

    我们去了日本大分县。这里有很多温泉。我们泡了温泉,哇,很舒服!(只是示例一下,这样子的描述会显得更生动)

    而且我们还去水族馆。
    我看到很多不同的鱼类,还有海驴(同问:这是个什么东东?)、海豚、海象、什么的。
    海象的杂技不错,我觉得它是很聪明的动物。
    饲养员允许我摸了摸海象, 然后他说:“摸海象之后,请闻闻你手吧。” (这样句子的连接更自然)
    我闻了闻………手起来很腥!
    不用说,我马上就洗手了。

     

    其实写的非常好,看起来意思也非常清晰,没有歧义和大的错误。我的这些改动都是很细微的,而且有些只是为了让语句看起来更自然而已。加油~~

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    April 18, 2013
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    我第一次去了中国

    我刚太从中国回来。这是我在中国的第一次旅行,所以我想旅游很多看一些地方,同时也练习中文。总共,十一天的时间里我去了五个地方了。有乡镇(I guess you means rural area and town)和大城市。不管那些地方大或小, 到处都有很多活动! 将来我要写一点关于各地方的东西(或文章)。

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    April 17, 2013
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    我的名字。

    我叫夏美芝。你喜欢我的名字吗?
    My name is Xia Meizhi. Do you like my name?

    你叫什么名字?你的名字是什么意思呢?
    What is your name? What does your namea mean?

     

    by the way,chinese do not always ask the question-- What does your namea mean?

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    April 16, 2013
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    拿, 把 , 和 从

    1. 他拿手把橙子脱皮了。 他用手剥掉了橙子皮。他把橙子皮用手剥掉。
    He peeled off orange using hand.
    2. 他从手把手套脱了。 他脱下了手套。OR他把手套脱下来。
    He took off glove from hand.
    3. 他拿刀子把苹果弄坏了。还是 , 他那刀子把水果切了。他用刀切苹果。 OR他把苹果用刀切开。
    He cut apple using knife.
    4. 他从一棵树拿棍子把香蕉脱了。 他用棍子从树上把香蕉弄下来。OR 他用棍子把香蕉从树上弄下来。
    He took off banana from a trww using stick.

    这些句子对吗?

     

    p.s.把字句是中文中一个特殊的句式,可以和被字句相互转换。

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    April 16, 2013
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    请大家帮我改这些句子

    这些天我满脑子都是买房子的事情
    我一直呆在家里 
    没有力气 
    刚才从外面传来锤子敲击的声音
    明天就要去学校了,但是我还没做完作业
    我在要再睡一个懒觉(或者是我现在打算睡一个懒觉,看你是想表述哪一种)

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    April 16, 2013
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    对中文自信一点

    我知道我的中文写得不错,可是我在现实中跟中国人说中文的时候总会害羞(其实最好把“跟中国人说中文的时候”简化为“说中文的时候”,或者“跟中国人说话的时候)”。如果我想继续进步,我需要更自信一点!

    我今天在学校的时候,我在上课之前去餐厅买了一个马芬。在那里我遇到了一个很美丽的中国女孩,我们以前在学校上见过。在我看到她的时候,她也看到我,我们都感觉以前见过了。我们看着对方的眼睛,相互凝视了一眼,但我没有停留,继续走向了餐厅。在排队的时候我确定应该跟她聊天一下,因为我快上课了,所以我买完马芬后回来向她做了自我介绍,互换了微信帐号~ 


    好像她记得我在那个非诚勿扰活动的灾难 -_- 后来我想起来我们还在教师的办公室外面见过。我记得那时候我们也分享过那个深深的凝视了。

    我觉得自己不应该想太多,可是没办法~那一眼深深的凝望!我会小心一点,不要再那么快爱上,嘻嘻。

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    April 16, 2013
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    About pets About the pets, I love dogs and cats, I feel they are very lovely. Fishes and birds is ok, but because I can't hold them in my alms,I feel they are not so close. But the insects and amphibious are not ok for me,a little terrible. people said that if you want to love,you should have a cat. And if you want to be loved, you should have a dog. Of course I want to be loved,so I love dogs very much,I think they are the most lovely animal.They are faithful friends of human,they make me feel warm and safe. Cats are very cute,looks pretty and proud.I rather to be a girl like a cat than to have one.
    April 16, 2013
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    Try to practice my English Today I talked to a foreign friend. I find that my English is so poor. I have forgotten many words,when we speaking,I can not understand him very well. When I want to say something,I do not know how to pronounce, and there are also a lot of mistakes. so I decided to practice writing and speaking .I think writing can help me to remember the words, and speaking can regulate my accent, I really hope I can improve my English communication skills.
    April 7, 2013
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself My name is Catie King,I'm from china.I want to learn English .I can speak just a little English.I like to make friends with others.I can help people to practice their chinese,too.^.^
    May 27, 2011
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