This song on my mind

Hello guys. I thought to write something about this lyric from a song by passenger called, "Let her go". There was something that called my attention. One part of the lyric says, "Cause you loved her too much and you dived too deep". I know now It's means when you're going too fast in a relationship. I'm sure almost all people (Would use, "Everyone") knows where this guy is coming from. (I'm sure almost all (Would use instead, "most")people can be feels identify ied with this.)

The adjective

1. My friends bought a huge, beautiful house for all (you don't need to use "all" when it's in this context" their family. 
2. I like Msr. (I'm not sure what "Msr." means but I think you would mean "Mrs.") Morgan. She is a the nicest, and most attentive doctor who I've (Could also say, "I have") ever knew known(Knew is present tense) 
3.Next week I am going to go to the IKEA store, there I will what want to buy a coffee table for my living room. 
4. Last winter my husband and I were in Thai for three months, we enjoyed the white sand, and warm sea. It was a long, and wonderful vacation.
5. I have been reading "The Lord of the Rings" it is an interesting book. I bought it one(Could also use, "A") week ago.

Tips:

There are three ways to address people:

Mrs. - Used when referring to a married woman

Ms. - Used when referring to an unmarried woman.

Mr. - Used when referring to a man

I'm not sure if it is just a personal preference but I feel that when using commas to describe things the last comma should be followed by an "And".

Since, "Sand" and "Sea" are plural you would not refer to them with an "a" you would use "the" unless you were talking about a single grain of sand.

A club

Today, after my teaching I went to bouldering (What is bouldering?) with my friends. Then we went to me and drink some Turkish coffee which I would like to prepare (Could also use, "Make"). The(Unneeded) Next was going to the bar for a beer and at the end then we went to some club to dance.

Tips:

"drank" is past tense you would use it if you were saying:

We drank lemonade yesterday.

"Would like" is used as a polite way of asking for something or telling someone you want to do something, to express an interest you would use "To like".

The idea of these days..

In the (Could also use, "Over the")Last few days, I have suffered for the a dilemma on how I will manage for my life, and having what kind of job I will have.

I have some a wish list of my future jobs (Could also use, "I have some wishes for future jobs"). But, as the life itself is, Neither of them , cannot satisfy my expectations completely.

I hope (Could also use, "I want/Wish")to be a commecialist.(This is another topic so that< Should end with a period) but This would make a problem to choose in choosing my life partner, in the case of she doesn't like to live living abroad. It doesn't sound bad to be a producer in the broadcasting company, however I would not have regular life pattern as it need to work at random hour it would require working random hours.(If you don't understand(Could also use, "know") what I am referring to, I will put it this way, in korea at least, the producers in the broadcasting industry work for undecided hours) 

I will continue as soon as any correction or feedback come.

Some tips for the future:

I's that stand alone in sentances are ALWAYS  capitalized.

The words in blue are not wrong but, I figured it would be useful to know of different phrases you can use instead.

Depending on you computer (Pc or Mac)

1: Go to the control panel

2: Go to "add a language" (It's under "Clock, Language, Region")

3: Click the option "Add a language" 

4: Then you can search for the Japanese language

5: Select it and then download the language pack

6: After that it should show up in the toolbar, select the "Hiragana" option and then write the characters in Romaji and they will show up as hiragana letters