Can you please check these phrases

Noun Phrases

The girl had exceptionally pretty hair.
特意漂亮头发的女孩--→女孩拥有特别漂亮的头发。

The shops cakes are the sweetest.
最糖的商店一块蛋糕  --→ 这家店里的蛋糕最甜。

The computer was the newest on the market
新在市场的电脑   --→  这台电脑是市场上最新的。

Ding Yun’s coat was very expensive.
丁云很贵的外套   --→  丁云的外套很贵。

The desk was old and worn.
旧和破的桌子   --→  又旧又破的桌子。


Aspect Phrases ;-）

Because it was late, the children were returning home
因为就晚了，孩子们回家着   --→因为晚了，孩子们就回家了。  

The teacher had told the students to sit
一个老师告诉了学生坐了   --→  老师让学生坐下。

The people started to fight
人民开始就战了   --→  人民开始了战斗。

He was reading aloud, but it was clearly wrong
他朗读着，但是显然错了   --→  他大声朗读，但显然是错了。

“I will pay you back tomorrow”
“我明天将要还你”  --→ 我明天还给你。

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