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I think online shopping are becoming convenient and popular because with online shopping i can buy things wherever and whenever i want. especially on China's Single's day, it is the largest online shopping day in the world. there are so many goods online on sale designed to attract online cusomers. for example, if I want to buy somethings such as books ,clothes, and electronic devices online. all i need to do is open the online shopping apps on my phone and search for the things i want to buy , and it'll take me just two minutes to pay on my phone, so it saves more time than shopping at a real store, and also it saves a lot of my money.