A draft of speaking

I think online shopping are is becoming convenient and popular because with online shopping I can buy things wherever and whenever I want, especially on China's Single's day which it is the largest online shopping day in the world. There are so many goods online on sale designed to attract online cusomers. For example, if I want to buy somethings such as books, clothes, and electronic devices online, all I need to do is opening the shopping apps on my phone and search for the things what I want to buy. It just only takes me two minutes to pay on my phone, so it saves more time than shopping at a real store, and also it saves me a lot of my money.

a draft of speaking

I think online shopping is becoming more convenient and popular because when shopping online I can buy things wherever and whenever I want. Especially on 'China's Single's day', which is the largest online shopping day in the world. There are so many goods available online at a discount designed to attract more online customers. For example, if I wanted to buy somethings like books, clothes, and electronic devices online it is very convenient. All I'd need to do is open the shopping apps on my phone and search for the things I want to buy, it just takes me two minutes to pay on my phone, so it saves more time than shopping at a real store, and it also saves me a lot of money.

a draft of speaking

I think online shopping are becoming convenient and popular because with online shopping i can buy things wherever and whenever i want. especially on China's Single's day, it is the largest online shopping day in the world. there are so many goods online on sale designed to attract online cusomers. for example, if I want to buy somethings such as books ,clothes, and electronic devices online. all i need to do is open the online shopping apps on my phone and search for the things i want to buy , and it'll take me just two minutes to pay on my phone, so it saves more time than shopping at a real store, and also it saves a lot of my money.