TV or the Internet
Hi there!
I used to watch TV when I was a teenager. But time moves on and new technologies, which replace the old ones, come into to our lives. Most teenagers prefer the Internet to TV. It's quite easy to understand why the Internet is becoming more popular now.
There're a lot of content you can choose from. You can find everything in the Internet!
The more the Internet develops, the more industries <s>of the real life come there</s>. The more industries move online.
A few years ago, you could<s> just* </s>only use it to find the information you needed, but now many people can't live without it. All their life <s>buildings </s>is built around the Internet.
Of course, <s>it</s> the internet* has a lot of pluses. The Internet might be very useful if you use it the right way. It might help you with learning foreign languages, finding new friends, <s>which </s>who live in different countries, finding new hobbies, <s>and</s>*<s> </s>etc.
But most <s>of the</s> people prefer to waste time scrolling their news feed and watching YouTube. That's why the Internet <s>might</s> can be dangerous.
<s>At that time W</s>hen TV was more popular, <s>the</s> most <s>of the</s> people watched TV a couple of hours a day and the rest of their life was taken up by different things. But they didn't have the opportunities the Internet gives now. So, it's* a very difficult issue that should be discussed.
*You don't need to use Just and Only in the same sentence. Pick one :)
*When you start a new paragraph, make sure to repeat the noun of the subject, not use 'it'. You wrote a correct sentence, but it's confusing when you don't repeat the subject at least a few times in a text.
*You don't need to use "and etc." just "etc."
*Say what it is again. For instance, "So, wasting time on the internet is an important issue to discuss." In formal writing, such as writing an essay, try noto to start a sentence with "So". "Wasting time on the internet is an important issue that should be discussed."