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The Flowers Of War
This afternoon when I watched movie "The Flowers Of War", I was so touched by it and cried. I can't help crying while see films about war every time, because it is too cruel. Although this is history, but I dont think some silly people can hv right to doubt its reality about Nanjing massacre.
For your first sentence: either "I was so touched by it that I cried" or "I was touched by it and cried" would sound more natural to me.
For the second sentence: either "I can't help crying everytime I see a film about war, because..." or "I can't help crying when I see films about war, because..." would sound more natural to me.
If I understand your third sentence correctly, the following would sound more natural to me: "Although this is history, I don't see how some people can doubt the reality of the Nanjing Massacre."
0 votedMarch 31, 20121about me a bit
Hello my friends. I am growing up and I have just a dramed(???), which is to go abroad. I want to understand your customs. Oh, of course, I can talk about our customs too. Ok? Please help me. Thank you! heihei.
In your first sentence, perhaps you meant to say "Hello my friends. I am growing up and I have a dream, which is..."?
"Hello my friends. I am growing up and have just had a dream, which is..." would also work.
0 votedMarch 31, 20120- An essay on holiday movies 我没有一个最喜欢的节日电影， 不过在万圣节期间， 我总是看过一部Stephen King 的电影。在我第一次看过这部电影种的时候， 我只有八年。在我的朋友的家我跟几个朋友都第一次看过It。以后，我门都感一点可怕。It跟什么节日没有关，不过什么有可怕的电影跟万圣节有关，吧？在It，有的孩字在一个农村反一个很古老的加害物反对。多年以后，那个古老的加害物回了。既然这个孩子都知道这个加害物回了，那他们都回家乡反这个加害物反对得好。 It 很好，不过不是我的最喜欢的电影。 在万圣节的时候，我也喜欢看过The Mist。The Mist 的导演也是Stephen King。在我第一次看过The Mist 的时候，我有十年。按照我的看法，The Mist 很好看。这个电影也又有的人又一个农村。一天在这个农村，很多魍魉去来。有的人在一个超级市场躲了。到底，一个男人剩了。The Mist 有一点悲剧性，不过还很好。 I don't have a favorite holiday movie, but around Halloween I always watch a movie directed by Stephen King. My first time typing this kind of movie I was only 8 years old. At a friend's house, some friend's and I all watched "It" for the first time. Afterwards, we all felt a little bit afraid. The movie "It" isn't exactly relevant to any holiday, but any scary movie is relevant to Halloween, right? In "It" some children in a rural town oppose an ancient monster. Many years later this ancient evil returns. The children know that the monster has returned so they return to their hometown and destroy it. "It" is very good, but it is not my favorite movie. Around Halloween I also like to watch "The Mist". "The Mist" was also directed by Stephen King. I was 10 the first time I saw "The Mist". In my opinion, "The Mist" is very good. This movie also has some people and a rural town. One day in this town many monsters come. Some people hide in a supermarket from the monsters. Finally, one man is left. "The Mist" is very sad, but still good.March 20, 201210
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
i am a sunshine boy, and i like sports, traveling and learning. i think i am kind towards everyone around, and i'd like to help others, especially in language learning. For learning english, i want to travel and study abroad.
What's a sunshine boy?
0 votedMarch 9, 20121Practicing
Hello everybody, my friends.
It's a pleasure to introduce myself; my name is John. I'm a businessman and work at my won shop. In my free time I like reading, listening to music, traveling and shopping. So, me and my friends go window-shopping, go out to eat, have a chat or go to the suburbs sometimes because I llike nature.
To be honest, in order to strengthen my oral speaking, if I have the opportunity to meet a foreign friend, I will seize the opportunity to speak with the foreign friend, but I found I still need to learn new vocabulary grammar and practice more. Speaking of this, I feel my advantage is that I'm not afraid of misspeaking, even in front of native speaker. I'm proud of myself about that.
My final goal is want to speak English fluently. I hope I can speak English as well as native speaker. It will take a long, long time I think, but it's ok. I'm sure I'll be able to overcome them if I keep practicing. Wish me good luck and success.0 votedMay 22, 20110ifnoif's notebook entry: May 13, 2011
The beginning of the day was so tough. I got up when the alarm clock rang like the other day and I felt so tired those days when I got up. I fight and get up finally, moving slowly。It is raining outside, it makes me not want to go to classes, but then I did it, I spend my morning in the(or "my") dormitory alone. I wonder what can cheer me up, but there is nothing but boring(?). I want to write this article but I don't know what to say. Damn it poor english. I want to do some sports but it's raining everyday, and there isn't an indoor sports room, I haven't done my sports since the rain start a week ago. It sucks.0 votedMay 14, 20110willaniu's notebook entry: May 13, 2011
Thank you. I want to say thank you to all.
My son got sick this week. It was the worst illness since he was born. I got very sad which make me feel like my heart is bleeding.
I just want to express my appriate to my friends and my students who are very considerate and tried to comfort me.
I am sure everything will get better soon. I just hope it will be as soon as possible. God bless.
I hope your son feels better.
I don't recognize the word "appriate".0 votedMay 13, 20110
