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An essay on holiday movies 我没有一个最喜欢的节日电影, 不过在万圣节期间, 我总是看过一部Stephen King 的电影。在我第一次看过这部电影种的时候, 我只有八年。在我的朋友的家我跟几个朋友都第一次看过It。以后,我门都感一点可怕。It跟什么节日没有关,不过什么有可怕的电影跟万圣节有关,吧?在It,有的孩字在一个农村反一个很古老的加害物反对。多年以后,那个古老的加害物回了。既然这个孩子都知道这个加害物回了,那他们都回家乡反这个加害物反对得好。 It 很好,不过不是我的最喜欢的电影。 在万圣节的时候,我也喜欢看过The Mist。The Mist 的导演也是Stephen King。在我第一次看过The Mist 的时候,我有十年。按照我的看法,The Mist 很好看。这个电影也又有的人又一个农村。一天在这个农村,很多魍魉去来。有的人在一个超级市场躲了。到底,一个男人剩了。The Mist 有一点悲剧性,不过还很好。 I don't have a favorite holiday movie, but around Halloween I always watch a movie directed by Stephen King. My first time typing this kind of movie I was only 8 years old. At a friend's house, some friend's and I all watched "It" for the first time. Afterwards, we all felt a little bit afraid. The movie "It" isn't exactly relevant to any holiday, but any scary movie is relevant to Halloween, right? In "It" some children in a rural town oppose an ancient monster. Many years later this ancient evil returns. The children know that the monster has returned so they return to their hometown and destroy it. "It" is very good, but it is not my favorite movie. Around Halloween I also like to watch "The Mist". "The Mist" was also directed by Stephen King. I was 10 the first time I saw "The Mist". In my opinion, "The Mist" is very good. This movie also has some people and a rural town. One day in this town many monsters come. Some people hide in a supermarket from the monsters. Finally, one man is left. "The Mist" is very sad, but still good.

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没有一个能吸引我的周未電影, 在每年万圣节期中, 我总能看到恐怖大師史帝芬金的影片。初次看這類影片我才8歲。那時在我的朋友的家,我和我朋友都頭一回看恐怖電影。我门之後才感到有些害怕。這類影片跟万圣节一點也沒關系,很少有万圣节的电影,對吧?在It,有的孩字在一个农村反一个很古老的加害物反对。多年以后,那个古老的加害物回了。既然这个孩子都知道这个加害物回了,那他们都回家乡反这个加害物反对得好。
It 很好,不过不是我的最喜欢的电影。 (PS:瞌睡來了,先睡了。先幫你改到這裡吧)

回顧万圣节,我也喜欢看过『迷霧』。『迷霧』的导演也恐怖大師史帝芬金。第一次看『迷霧』的时候,我十歲。我覺得『迷霧』很棒。这部电影講敘述了,有一天在遠郊的城鎮出沒很多怪獸,有的人在一个超级市场躲了。最後,只剩下一个男的。The Mist 有一点悲剧性,不过还很好。()

I don't have a favorite holiday movie, but around Halloween I always watch a movie directed by Stephen King. My first time typing this kind of movie I was only 8 years old. At a friend's house, some friend's and I all watched "It" for the first time. Afterwards, we all felt a little bit afraid. The movie "It" isn't exactly relevant to any holiday, but any scary movie is relevant to Halloween, right? In "It" some children in a rural town oppose an ancient monster. Many years later this ancient evil returns. The children know that the monster has returned so they return to their hometown and destroy it. "It" is very good, but it is not my favorite movie.

Around Halloween I also like to watch "The Mist". "The Mist" was also directed by Stephen King. I was 10 the first time I saw "The Mist". In my opinion, "The Mist" is very good. This movie also has some people and a rural town. One day in this town many monsters come. Some people hide in a supermarket from the monsters. Finally, one man is left. "The Mist" is very sad, but still good.

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