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    Seré el Cookie Monster Nuevamente!

    Writing Challenge: Day 1

    Miércoles 1 de julio de 2020

    Mi Dieta

    Me <s>senté</s> siento mal <s>para la manera de cuanto </s> por lo mucho que comí recientemente. Asi que comencé una dieta el 2 de junio basado en 400 calorías por día. La primera semana fue muy duro porque estaba pensado sobre <s>la</s> comida todo el tiempo. Mi estómago estaba gruñendo. El sonido fue ruidoso : D
    Seguí haciendo ejercicio por 1 hora diaria cual ayudó que mantener mi mente lejos del pan y queso, los sándwiches de shawarma, algunos chocolates como Cadbury Twirls, y otra vez el queso y pan ;))

    Perdí primeros 5 KG y ahora mi peso es 58 KG. Sigo haciendo dieta pero perder peso ahora esta se volviendo más difícil.
    Unos vezes mi senté tan hambrienta asi que comí 700 calorías por día. Una vez tuve 1000 calorías pero no repetí mi error.

    Después de mi peso alcanza 55 kg, comenzaré tener 1000 calorías/ día. Seré el Cookie Monster nuevamente (",)


    ¡Buen trabajo! sigue así. Es una buena historia (:
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    July 1, 2020
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    Learn Spanish Hello, I'm a new tutor. I can teach you basic Spanish or have a conversation with you and have a good time.
    May 29, 2020
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    Aprende Español Hola a todos, soy una nueva tutora lista para enseñarte y hablar contigo mientras aprendes español.
    May 29, 2020
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    Mis asignaturas favoritas

    Cuando era pequeña, mi asignatura favorita siempre era matemáticas. Me gustan las matemáticas porque es como resolver puzzles. Me gusta el curso de matemáticas porque es lo mismo en todos los países. Nunca he sido buena en escribir, pero siempre era buena en matemáticas. Incluso hasta hoy, me encanta la matemática. Siempre hay una respuesta a cada pregunta. Sólo tienes que encontrarlo. También me gusta mucho la ciencia. Me gusta aprender sobre biología y cómo funciona el cuerpo. Además(También) me encanta aprender sobre el espacio y el universo. Siempre me han interesado las estrellas y los planetas. ¡Espero comprar un telescopio algún día!

    ¡Bien hecho!
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    May 19, 2020
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    Mi madre

    Llame mi madre hoy y hablé con mi madre(para no redundar sería "con ella"). Mi madre vive en Moscú pero no le gusta porque no puede ir a ninguna parte excepto las tiendas y mira television cada día. Ella <s>voy a ir</s> irá al campo porque le gusta la naturaleza.

    ¿Te gusta vivir en la ciudad o en el campo ?
    Pienso vivir en el campo cuando me jubile, la tranquilidad es lo mejor.

    ¡Buen trabajo! Espero que las correcciones te ayuden.
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    April 29, 2020
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    "Élite"- mis pensamientos <s>de la programma</s> del programa de <s>sobre</s> Netflix

    Miraba <s>la </s>el programa "Élite <s>sobre</s> de Netflix," y estaba tan confundido <s>lo</s> que necesité terminarla. El género <s>de la programma</s> del programa es complicado, un mezcla de un<s>a</s> programa dramático para muchachos y uno de <s>la</s> sistema legal. En un<s>a</s> programa dramático, la pieza más importante es <s>el</s> la red de las relaciones entre los personajes. Entonces, ¿por qué no hay <s>nada</s> un motivo por las acciones de los personajes? En el episodio primero(primer episodio), una chica y su novio asistieron a una fiesta, y con conocimiento total entre los dos, ¡ella fajó <s>un</s> con otro alumno de su colegio! Incluso el novio los miró- (con placer) Pués, pensé que ellos jugaban algún tipo de juego en su<s>s</s> relación, pero en la escena final, <s>se</s> parecío angustiado y la <s>seguío</s> siguió fuera de la casa. Miré el episodio de nuevo (en inglés, en caso que no haber comprendido el español), y todavía no comprendí.

    Recuerda que en el español los signos de interrogación y exclamación van al inicio y al final.
    ¡Espero que te ayude estas correcciones!
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    April 29, 2020
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    April 29, 2020
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    Hombre prevenido vale por dos . . .

    Holly vive en Pittsburg y la semana pasada subió a su coche para ir a la librería. Pero <s>muy</s> pronto aparcó su coche al borde de la carretera <s>otra vez</s>(ya que no se menciona una primera vez) porque olía <s>un olor</s> chamuscado. También oyó sonidos muy extraños debajo del capo.

    Un poco preocupada llamó a su marido Chris, que le aconsejó que abra el capo. ¿Y sabes que?
    En el compartimento del motor había por lo menos doscientas nueces y un montón de hierba.

    Resultó que las ardillas habían escondido las nueces y la hierba. En la lluvia Chris fue en la dirección de la librería para ayudar a Holly. Tardó más de una hora antes <s>de que habían quitado</s> en quitar todas las nueces y la hierba para poder llevar el coche a un garaje.

    El dueño del garaje les dijo que habían tenido mucha suerte: por la lluvia, la hierba era húmeda, si no la hubieran quitado, el coche <s>se pudiera</s> pudo haber prendido fuego. (¡vaya, qué difícil!)

    El día siguiente, Chris y Holly vieron que las ardillas habían trabajado duro de nuevo. Otra vez encontraron nueces y hierba debajo del capo.

    Según el dueño del garaje, ocurre a menudo que las ardillas esconden su suministro de alimentos en (los) coches, así que, en el caso de que siempre aparques tu coche afuera, <s>sea</s> mejor ve debajo del capo regularmente. Hombre prevenido vale por dos, ¿verdad?

    ¡Espero que las correcciones te ayuden!
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    April 27, 2020
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    La silla

    Me gusta la silla de mi despacho. Está hecho de mimbre. Aunque no es muy cómoda para una silla de una oficina, me gusta el aspecto que <s>tenga</s> tiene. Otro inconveniente que <s>tenga </s>tiene, es que no es muy práctico en una casa con once gatos. Los gatos les encantan afilar las uñas en la silla. Ya tiene un aspecto un poco descuidado, pero<s> sin embargo</s> me gusta la silla .Como el despacho es bastante moderno, con muebles blancos la silla se destaca porque es de color marrón. La compré en Ikea hace unos cuantos años, no me costó mucho. He pensado en <s>tirármela </s>tirarla, pero le he cogido cariño. A veces paso por una tienda de muebles de oficinas y me entra ganas de comprarme una silla nueva. Luego pienso en mi silla de mimbre y me da pena tirarla.

    ¡Espero que te ayuden estas correcciones! Buen trabajo.
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    April 24, 2020
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    Una oportunidad para practicar gramática

    Ayer <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">estado </s>estuve un buen día en el confinamiento. Por la mañana, ejercité, practiqué gamática de español y caminé. Por la tarde, hablaba con mi amiga cuando mi perro <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">comenzaba</s> comenzó a ladrar a otro perro en la calle. Buen<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">e</s>o, normalmente soy un <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">trazo</s> trozo de pan, pero en <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">esto</s> ese momento, me <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">cruzé </s>crucé los cables y <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">comencaba</s> comencé a gritarle al perro. Él terminó y yo <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">contunuaba</s> continuaba con mi conversación. Luego, conocí una comida muy deliciosa. Fue Moqueca, un plato nacional de Brasil. Primero, corté los vegetales , <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">entonces </s>Luego, los freí y finalmente añadí leche de coco y especias. Lo serví con arroz y pan.
    Anoche, mis hijas y yo v<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">e</s>ímos una peli cuando mi móvil sonó. Fue mi madre, quería saber si yo podría <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">ir as</s> hacer las compras para ella. Le dije 'por supuesto' y escribí una lista. Hoy he estado en el supermercado para comprar cosas. Cuando vuelto, me <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">duchaba </s>duché y comencé a escribir esta nota.

    ¡Espero que estas correcciones te ayuden!
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    April 24, 2020
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