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夏天终于来了!
我非常高兴,今天是很完美的。
有蓝蓝的天空,很明朗的太阳。万里无云。 【这样说也可以,但我觉得说“天空很蓝,阳光明媚,万里无云”更好。】
我在 加拿大 的 埃德蒙顿城市 (Edmonton)。这里的冬天总是很长、很冷,而且经常下雪。 这里的天气是跟哈尔滨很相似。【中文里一般说“跟……很相似(跟……很像)”,或者是“有相似之处(有相似的地方)”,而不说“有相似”。】(巧合的是,)哈尔滨是埃德蒙顿的友好城市。 【加上这句使前一句和后一句衔接更流畅。】我们从去年的九月就开始等这样的天气。希望不要再下雪了,我想享受外面的自然,种种花,或是去徒步旅行。
不幸的是,今天晚上我要打工!【我发现你很少使用逗号,适当地使用逗号可以使前后句的关系更紧密。(I find that you barely use commas in your composition. In my opinion, using commas appropriately can makes your composition more firmly organized.)】
0 votedMay 4, 20131- Who can tell me how to recite words? I have to say that I failed in the exam again. Everything goes smoothly except my English. It's a big problem for me to recite words. Ectually, I can remember it quickly and forget it quicker than I remember it. So I long for some effective methods to recite words. My friends, can you help me?May 2, 201320
- A Song of Ice And Fire Recently, I read a book called A Song of Ice And Fire, which was written by George R. R. Martin. It's such an epic book that shows us a marvellous huge world. But, to some degree, the world built by Martin in the novel is similar with our own world, where is full of desire, conflict, even conspiracy. And we, to the end, have to fight our own way out. It might be ridiculous to heard, but it's really how we live. By the way, my favorite character in the novel in Tyrion Lannister, the Imp. If you had read this book, which character do you like best? And why?March 14, 201310
Upside Down
I watched the film <em>Upside Down</em> yesterday. It has a very interesting background that there are 2 parallel world for some really weird reason. They are strictly separated, one is rich and the other is poor, and a hierarchal system is established in the 2 world. Just like Adam said, people in the up-top always win, and people in the down-below always fail. But there will always be exceptions, and the power of love may break the irrational rules. Though the love story is so sweet, I simply cannot afford to ignore its conventionality. Actually, I felt a little disappointment for what I wish to see is more than what I saw. I think it deserves a better story.
The visuals and acting are pretty good. The special effects are really astonishing. In addition, Jim Sturgess's eyes makes him so attractive, and his smile makes me swoon and giggle like a teenage girl.0 votedMarch 10, 20130- Upside Down I watch the film Upside Down yesterday. It has a very interesting background that there are 2 parallel world for some really weird reason. They are strictly separated, one is rich and the other is poor, and a hierarchal system is established in the 2 world. Just like Adam said, people in the up-top always win, and people in the down-below always fail. But there will always be exceptions, and the power of love may break the irrational rules. Though the love story is so sweet, I simply cannot afford to ignore its conventionality. Actually, I felt a little disappointment for what I wish to see is more than what I saw. I think it deserves a better story. The visuals and acting are pretty good. The special effects are really astonishing. In addition, Jim Sturgess's eyes makes him so attractive, and his smile makes me swoon and giggle like a teenage girl.
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