São Paulo, April 2, 2020

 

Dear HR Team:

 

My name is Charles Cabral, and I am writing in regards to the position of Commercial Director -- LatAm.

 

I am a professional with 25 years of experience in the automotive industry, and for the last 23 years I have worked at HPE Automotive of Brazil (Mitsubishi and Suzuki). Always learning, working hard and achieving great results, I was promoted often. I began as a salesman but I steadily assumed greater responsibilities as a supervisor, manager, general manager with a Brabus (Brazil) dealership and finally National Sales Manager in 2009 (to deal with the effects of the 2008 American financial crisis).

 

I have extensive managerial experience in retail and wholesale. I understand the difficulties both the automaker and the dealer face. In any situation, I have delivered consistently excellent results.

 

With my team, I developed, organized and facilitated training (technical, behavioral and product launch) for a network of 1,400 people, including salespeople and managers.

 

I organized the functions and responsibilities of eight regional offices to whom all dealers in Brazil reported. These responsibilities included disseminating best practices, making diagnoses and organizing action plans to increase performance through objectives and deadlines. With these actions supporting the company's strategy, we achieved the best results in the Company's history.

 

Results are directly linked to quick and consistent decision making. For that we need quality INFORMATION organized to the customer's needs and the market situation. In addition to that information, it is important to know what to do with it: making diagnoses, proposing action plans and monitoring the work and results.

 

I would love to have the opportunity to meet with you. I am certain that with my acquired experience and 

networking in the Brazilian’s automotive industry, I can contribute to your company's success.

 

Please contact me at (Work: 555-555-555 or Cell: 555-555-5556) at your convenience.

 

Best Regards,

Charles Cabral

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You will still want to polish this, but I think it's a good start. Good luck in your job search!

Dear Professor Wilson:

I read your proposal about cutting physical education and sports classes in middle schools and high schools and replacing them with test preparation classes.

I agree that test preparation is important for our students' future, but physical education and sports are equally important.

Many students will be offered college scholarships for their athletic abilities.

And the physical education teachers. What they will do without their classes?

We need more than three hours a week for test preparation classes. So, listen to my idea.

If we create online classes for test preparation, the students can choose to study whenever and wherever they want. This will help them. Once a week, on Saturday morning, one of us will come to the school to answer any questions.

What do you think?

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I didn't understand exactly what you wanted to say in those last few paragraphs.

It's a little difficult to read even for something formal. It works, If you want to match the original as close as possible, I've made just a few changes in option 1. If you want something more natural , consider option 2.

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With introductions of the new employees published in the company magazine, employees will have the opportunity to learn about all of the employees, deepening their understanding of various values and cultures.

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With bios of the new employees listed in the company magazine, employees can learn about each other and deepen their understanding of different values and cultures.

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Bio is short for biography. It can be short (quick introduction) or long (book).

Theatre is one of the most ancient cultural activities in human history. In the Western world, it began with the Greek civilization, and it has always been important in passing on knowledge. I would like to tell you why everyone should be involved in theatre. ("do theatre" is probably ok, but it sounds too casual for your entry here.)

First, acting helps us manage our emotions. Going on stage eliminates social barriers and forces you to interact with others without prejudice. Moreover it helps us manage the anxiety and self-doubt of encountering people we don't know. When we are on the stage in front of five hundred people, our minds warn us of the danger and activate our "survival instincts" giving us the strength to deal with the moment better. Therefore, when we act on a stage we train the management of our emotions.

Theatre helps us train our minds and memories. When we act on stage we must always pay attention, first by remembering our lines and their contexts, second by remembering which movements we have to do and third by focusing on other actors' movements and words.

Theatre helps us improve team building and teamwork. A show is essentially a group of individuals who cooperate and collaborate from start to finish to achieve the best result. There will be times when group members need to help each other by solving problems and dealing with unexpected events.

I have noticed from personal experience that acting as a character opens your mind, forcing you to think and reason differently as you play that role.

My advice to anyone, young or old, is to try theatre, It might be one of the best choices you ever make.

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Just one possible way to rewrite this. Overall, well done. Bravo! ;-)