How to best handle the relationship between parents and children

How to best handle the relationship between parents and children

No one can "can" is a modal auxiliary verb that requires another verb. Without it, this is an incomplete thought. "No one can <perform some action>" instead of parents. Parents raise us, and give us a lot. You probably want to be more specific here. "a lot" of what? You typically only use "a lot" when the subject is already known, like "he rides his bike a lot" or "They give us a lot of attention" When we <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">growed</s> have grown up, some<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">one</s> of us may have a rift <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204); color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">had a gap</s> with our parents. What should we do? How can we handle this relationship?

In my opinion, there are two aspects: this is a logical place for a colon " : " <s>The</s> when you add "the" you reduce the audience to a very specific set of parents, but I think you mean all parents, generally, anywhere in the world. Therefore, you don't need "the". parents should be more open minded, but at the same time, children should try to <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204); color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">be</s> understand their parents better.

All <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204); color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> parents want their children to be healthy and successful. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">The</s> Parents <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">won't hurt</s> don't mean to harm their children; this is a good place to use a semicolon " ; " <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">their</s> they just want to protect <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">children</s> them. But sometimes they are too nervous about their children's <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">life</s> lives. Spoiling them <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">and not caring</s> without concern for the outcome can make children more and more separated from their parents <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">in future</s> later in life. Sometimes Why only sometimes? <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">the</s> parents should try to understand their children's ideas, and <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204); color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">try to</s> let them <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204); color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">children do</s> make their own mistakes. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">It</s> This will <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">make the children better</s> better prepare the children for the challenges they will face in life.

<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">The</s> Children must remember <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">when their was a baby</s> <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">the parents is so patient, we should never forget they bring us up</s> how patiently their parents raised them This was a challenging sentence to arrange correctly because the initial approach was different. You went from talking about "we" as children to "they" as children, and then back to "we" in the next sentence. You need to be consistent. No matter what <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">happended</s>, we should protect them<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">.</s> because they are our parents. Remember one thing: this is another ideal place for a colon " : " don't make<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">s</s> your parents angry. Let them rest. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">And</s> Try to understand them. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">parents,</s> They always want us to be safe and successful. This is a strange way to end the paragraph because you suggest that one should "remember one thing", but then you list three things. That is an odd choice. You could rearrange the sentences so that not angering one's parents is the final thought of the paragraph.

Just understand each other. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">D</s><s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">on't always just thinking about </s><s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">ourself</s><s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">, care more our family.</s> This is a strange sentence because it combines both second person understood, and first person: "you" and "ourselves" don't really belong in the same sentence. Since you start the paragraph with second person understood, you should stick with that, but it makes it odd to read. You should make the first sentence "we" instead of "you". Here is one way you might express the same idea: "We should care as much for our families as we do about ourselves."

Please give me some help, thank you very much! :)