correct mistakes in my text please
I love singing but once I teased for being a girl with a deeply voice. So I always sang when I’m alone. My father had always wanted to hear of me sing but I never did so for lack of brave. One day, he played my favorite song in the car to the way home. Saw the beautiful scenery outside, I began to sing in a low voice. My father pretended to hear nothing and then my voice became loud than before. When we arrived home, he said, “This is the best song I’ve never heard.” After that, he was never afraid of singing in front of other people.
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correct mistakes in my text please
I love singing but once I I was teased once for being a girl with a deeply deep voice. So I always sang when I’m I was alone. My father had always wanted to hear of me sing, but I never did so for lack of bravery. One day, he played my favorite song in the car to on the way home. When I saw the beautiful scenery outside, I began to sing in a low voice. My father pretended to hear nothing and then my voice became louder than before. When we arrived home, he said, “This is the best song I’ve never ever heard.” After that, he I was never afraid of singing in front of other people. (The last sentence was grammatically correct, but I think you meant that YOU were no longer afraid to sing in front of other people, not your father.)
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correct mistakes in my text please
I love singing but once I teased for being a girl with a deep voice. So I always sang when I’m alone. My father had always wanted to hear me singing, but I never did for lack of brave. One day, he played my favorite song in the car on the way home. Due to the beautiful scenario outside, I began to sing with in a whisper. My father pretended to hear nothing and then my voice became loud than before. When we arrived home, he said, “This is the best song I’ve never heard.” After that, I was never afraid of singing in front of other people.
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I love singing but once I was teased for being a girl with a deep voice, so I always sang when I was alone. My father always wanted to hear me sing, but I didn't have the courage to sing in front of him. One day, he played my favorite song in the car on the way home. Seeing the beautiful scenery outside I began to sing in a low voice. My father pretended not to hear and then my voice became louder and louder. When we arrived home, he said, “That was the best song I’ve ever heard.” After that, I was never afraid of singing in front of other people.
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correct mistakes in my text please
I love singing to sing, but once I was teased once for having a deep being a girl with a deeply voice for a girl. So I always only sang when I’m was alone. My father had always wanted to hear of me sing, but I never was brave enough to do it did so for lack of brave. One day, he played my favorite song in the car onto the way home. As I saw the beautiful scenery outside, I began to sing in a low voice. My father pretended to he didn't hear nothing anything and so I sang louder than before then my voice became loud than before. When we arrived home, he said, “This is the best song I’ve ever heard.” After that, he was never afraid of singing in front of other people.
(Confused about the last sentence, do you mean to say that you were no longer afraid of singing in front of others or your father was no longer afraid..? )
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