Hello, I am Miu.
Please check my grammar and give me some advice/advise me.
Today, I [will] talk about what I did last Sunday,
<s style="background-color: rgb(249, 249, 249); color: rgb(3, 3, 3);">in</s> Last Sunday, I cooked ramen (in my)/(at) home <s style="background-color: rgb(249, 249, 249); color: rgb(3, 3, 3);">house</s>.
I love ramen, I always eat [it] at the restaurant <s style="background-color: rgb(249, 249, 249); color: rgb(3, 3, 3);">shop</s>.
<s style="background-color: rgb(249, 249, 249); color: rgb(3, 3, 3);">it is more happy</s> I'm more happy <s style="background-color: rgb(249, 249, 249); color: rgb(3, 3, 3);">that</s> when I can eat ramen (in my)/(at) home <s style="background-color: rgb(249, 249, 249); color: rgb(3, 3, 3);">house</s>.
So I challenged [myself] to cooking (in my)/(at) home.
My most <s style="background-color: rgb(249, 249, 249); color: rgb(3, 3, 3);">like </s> favorite ramen is made from pork bone.
I wanted [to] make soup from pork bone.
However, i couldn't buy it.
[Instead](かわりに), I cooked soup from chicken bone and fish.
My ramen <s style="background-color: rgb(249, 249, 249); color: rgb(3, 3, 3);">is</s> <s style="background-color: rgb(249, 249, 249); color: rgb(3, 3, 3);">taste</s> tasted good.
<s style="background-color: rgb(249, 249, 249); color: rgb(3, 3, 3);">In this time</s> This time, I will eat my soup with noodles bought at the restaurant <s style="background-color: rgb(249, 249, 249); color: rgb(3, 3, 3);">store</s>.
Next time, I want to cook [my own] soup and noodle.
Thank you for your listening.
これでいいですかね
頑張ってください！
