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Please correct my English on video. https://youtu.be/6fHW1KRXNHI There is sentence is in detail note. If you correct my English, I will happy.

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Hello, I am Miu.
Please check my grammar and give me some advice/advise me.
Today, I [will] talk about what I did last Sunday,
in Last Sunday, I cooked ramen (in my)/(at) home house.
I love ramen, I always eat [it] at the restaurant shop.
it is more happy I'm more happy that when I can eat ramen (in my)/(at) home house.
So I challenged [myself] to cooking (in my)/(at) home.
My most like favorite ramen is made from pork bone.
I wanted [to] make soup from pork bone.
However, i couldn't buy it.
[Instead](かわりに), I cooked soup from chicken bone and fish.
My ramen is taste tasted good.
In this time This time, I will eat my soup with noodles bought at the restaurant store.
Next time, I want to cook [my own] soup and noodle.
Thank you for your listening.

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To Mr. Luckey Thank you for your support!! I laughed cock's mean. Your support is helpful!
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To Mr.Stephanus Thank you for your support! Your explanation is easy to understand! That is very helpful.
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hi miu, I’ve put the corrections next to the original text. I hope this is helpful.


hello, i am miu. (Or , Hello, my name is Miu).
please check my grammar and advice for me. ( please check my grammar and let me know if I can do better?)
today, i talk about what i did in last Sunday,(today I will talk about what I did last Sunday/ or how I spent my last Sunday).
in last Sunday, I cooked ramen in my house.(last Sunday, I cooked ramen for myself at home.)
i love ramen, i always eat at shop.( I love eating ramen, be it at stores or at restaurants.)
it is more happy that i can eat ramen in my house.( I am all the more happy when I can cook ramen for myself at home.)
so, i challenged cooking in my house.(I wanted to take up the challenge of cooking ramen at home.)
my most like ramen is made from pork bone.( the ramen I make mostly has pork bone in it.)
i wanted make soup from pork bone.( I really like pork bone In the ramen soup.)
however, i couldn't buy it.( however this time I couldn’t buy it.)
I cooked soup from chicken bone and fish. Therefore, I cooked the soup with chicken bone and fish.)
my ramen is taste good. ( my ramen tasted really good.)
In this time, i eat my soup with noodles bought at store. ( this time I ate my soup with noodles bought from the store.)
next time, i want to cook soup and noodle. ( next time, I want to cook the soup and noodles at home.)
Thank you for your listening.( thank you for listening to this video.)
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today, i talk about what i did in last Sunday -> today I will talk about what I did last sunday. (You don't say "in" when you are talking about days. But you use it when you talk about months. "in July", "in December" or "in summer" or "in winter". But when you talk about days of the week you can use "on". "on sunday". "on monday". But because you said "last sunday" you don't use the "on" because the "last" already explains which sunday you mean. in last Sunday, i cocked ramen in my house. -> You can use "on last sunday" but most people would say "last sunday" like i mentioned before. cocked is spelled "cooked". it is more happy that i can eat ramen in my house. -> It is "great" that i can eat ramen in my house. "Happy" is used to describe people or animals mostly. You are talking about the ramen so you can say "It is great that I can eat ramen in my house". If you want to say it makes you happy. You can say "I am happy that I can eat ramen in my house" so, i challenged cooking in my house. -> I challenged myself to cooking in my house. You need to say who you challenged. In this case "myself". And then the "to" describes what you challenged yourself. my most like ramen is made from pork bone. -> my favourite ramen is made from pork bone. Most like = Favourite i wanted make soup from pork bone. -> I wanted to make soup from pork bone my ramen is taste good. -> my ramen tastes good In this time, i eat my soup with noodles bought at store. -> This time, I ate my soup with noodles bought at the store. Eat = Now. Ate = Past. You also need to say "the store" instead of just store. Your english is good. I understood everything you were saying without a problem. Hopefully what I put above helps you

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